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"REMEMBER"
  by KiNg-Go0B3r


International Players INSTRUMENTAL - UGK feat. Outkast

ight so whats up
ain't seen you in so long
i'm like fuck
when you showed up in your get up
i'm like damn
had me remembering when we use to fuck
i used to cut you up like nip/tuck
you the last person i'd expect to see at this fiesta
party at my home boys
people making loud noise
so i take you away from the noise
sit you down
stare into your eyes while you smile
making me smile
mean while
some how
i got her to scoot over closer
to hold her
her head on my shoulder
the dj switching to a slow song now
marqeues houston
circles
she looks at me
like she want to say something
but her heart won't let her
so i tell her
i know whats on your mind
and its no issue
cause i'd be lieing
if i said i didn't miss you

fo real fo real

cause you in my heart still
cold chill
down my spine
your lips touched mine
mmmmm tastey
so fine like wine
sweet and juicy
now you'll be
stuck on my mind for a long time
her body starts to whind
im loving it more and more by the second
and it feels so good as if this was a blesson
i lay her down and say
"i'm sorry we didn't make things work,
we were young but now we're older
i'm willing to make this work"
she leans up and puts her finger on her my lip
and says, "i love you, lets make this night
we'll never forget"
i'm like shit
lets get it shawty
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Date Submitted: Jun 23, 2008 (12:01 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 08/01/09 (03:21 PM)
Author: ohmi
Poem Title: Love, the only thing...

Date: 06/30/08 (01:45 PM)
Author: babygur
Poem Title: I Remeber...

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  NativeLady
10/27/09 (07:40 PM) 
hot write hun. seeing a ex can help refresh and rekindle old feellings. ~TIFF~

  ThepureBlackpo...
10/25/09 (05:06 PM) 
This is a very good piece, lol...simply poetic

  Paralyzed
10/24/09 (08:17 PM) 
that was so real when people you liked and you havent seen in a while appear out the blue its so crazy all the feelings come back im experiencing this right now

  mizemotion
10/24/09 (05:15 PM) 
hahahahaha....wow your last lines really made me smile....lolz....dang...aint it always true that when we break up wit someone or we fall away from them...there\'s always that little part of us that misses them...whether it\'s their laughter or the jokes, or the hard times they used to give us....hahahaha...good days good days....lovin ur drop right here...wish i could rate it a ten.....

  leethal
09/07/09 (03:04 AM) 
you got a nice flow goob & this probly doesnt mean anything to any1 but i like the spacing & the placement of your words. it helps the flow, flow faster. do u rap 2? i'm feelin that vibe in your scribes. i been bumpin that circles track #5 the last 2 days. i'm surprised that track still plays haha. "i got her to scoot over closer to hold her her head on my shoulder" thats a mega flow!!! i'm givin u 10 4 that drop right there!

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