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"Remember"
  by J Baby


You remember when you loved me and greeted me with a kiss
When you used to sing to me with your sexy lisp
Remember when on your shoulder I cried
And when you escorted me to the funeral of my friend who had died
Do you remeber the first day I met you
From that day on I knew love was true
Remember when I fell and you carried me around
When I was sad and your words lifted me above solid ground
Remember when I got evicted
And you were there to repair my bad living
Remember when my life just went wrong
And you were there to lift me up with your song
Remember when you cheated and our love went down the drain
And when your words and your presence no longer took away the pain
Remember when you called and we argued over the phone
And when I told you to be with her cause my love for you is gone
When you remember though you try not to
Also remember what you put me through
Remember my tears and my exact words
Tell you girl in the end ya''l both gone get what you deserve
Now remember and don't you ever forget
Cause though I give and I give you will get what you get
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Date Submitted: May 12, 2007 (06:12 PM)
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  Ambition.&.Att...
07/22/07 (02:33 AM) 
Yeaa This Wus Strong. And Love Is Such A Bullshit Game That I Partake In Playing. It's So Right When It's Really Wrong Ya Kno ? I Really Liked This Poem Tho. I Remember When Me & That Special Someone Remembered Stuff That Only We Could Remember :) Lol Yu Kno, Memories Together And All. But Keep Ya Head Up Lil Mama, And It'll Be All Good

  TeeBee
06/08/07 (11:55 AM) 
This was a nice poem....a lot of emotions going on in this write. So beautiful in the beginning so sad mid-way and by the ending you had freed yourself....well done!

  LAfinest
05/30/07 (09:02 PM) 
this is deepn love is a strong word ma ..anyway ima give u a 10

  TJ, the one an...
05/30/07 (06:40 PM) 
you are a real poet. u hav alot to say for a 13 year old. i like yo style ma. u can make real money off of this stuff. keep on!

  Lil B's Momma
05/29/07 (03:00 PM) 
yeah i feel you on this one!

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