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"Remembering"
  by .Still.Cat.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I’M LOGGING OFF NOW by HOLLA @ UR GURL


* I'm drunk and on my Otis shit tonight...you ain't got to fuck with it...

ive got dreams - otis redding

Nobody knows
what everyone thinks
they know
and how I felt
inside...

I walked away
refused to cry
and swallowed my hurt
and my pain
inside...

Praying for peace
and doing whatever I could
to remember
before we became
this mess
cause
inside...

I still want to stay
I still love him
I can find faith to forgive him
and if that make me weak
and that make me wrong
than
inside...

I will make my peace
with that
as well
but right now
as you log off
I have dreams
to remember
inside...

Dreams I still
after all that I saw
and that was said
want to see
come to fruition
inside...

Like I said
nobody knows
what they all think
they know
and I still believe
inside...

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Date Submitted: Jul 21, 2008 (02:51 AM)
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  LiquidFire
08/01/08 (10:12 AM) 
Hmmm, I digested this in sooo many ways. But like pamo said ur left with urself at the end of the day, fuck everybody else. Trust me anyone can tell you how to feel but til they've been there and even in some cases if they've been there can't nobody account for ur reasoning or feelings. Period. I like the flow to this

  LadyMay16
07/23/08 (10:37 AM) 
Hold fast to your dreams mama..the one thing a person canot take away..I got it tatt on myself just to remember

  JuztBe
07/23/08 (09:59 AM) 
wow excellent response ma!! loved the way you opened this one up i been here so many times as well forgivin no good men i dont even wanna talk about it lol its makin me mad at myself all over again but this was nicely done

  DREA23
07/22/08 (12:08 PM) 
Human right?, oh yea we are most def riding...they see u lol...I'm there, enough said Well written mama as if u didn't know :)

  B. Rose
07/21/08 (10:59 AM) 
I feel pain in this write Cat... Damn... *HUGS*

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