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"Remembering Yellow"
  by nilla bean
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Remembering Blue by Syndel


Soft as a lilting buttercup
is yellow
brazenly warm and subtly seductive
a concoction of sweetness and heat like big mama's hotwater cornbread on the inside
intensely sulfuric and liquid smooth like the yolk of an egg
the circumference of which mimics the sun
bursting with lava-like oils and gases
yellow is thick and acrid like ice cold buttermilk
or acidic and tainted, forever lingering in the darkest piss-scented alleys
It is the sound a a child singing his first note
the flutter of a hummingbird's wings
the undertone of bright oranges and reds
and sundresses swishing across redbone hips and thighs
yellow is the scent of honeysuckle floating in the breeze
a Sunday morning church hat with feathers and matching slingbacks
talcum powder , family dinners and white-gloved ushers
the depletion of color in between black and silver rinses
the sallow of sickness and death
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Date Submitted: Feb 15, 2009 (11:57 PM)
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  RedLoveSong
02/16/09 (01:40 PM) 
Such a nice response....I felt like I experienced each as you described them. Nice job...Yellow is one of my favorite colors!

  Syndel
02/16/09 (05:27 AM) 
this is a hot response the description of yellow is exactly what I would have felt thank you so much for this creative flow of the color Yellow

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