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"REPLACEMENT (TO MY X BESTFRIEND)"
  by BLAKK ROSE


YOU TRIED TO BREAK MY SPIRIT, BUT ITLL COME BAKK IN THE END/
KARMA IS A BEEZNICH DEPENDIN ON THE MOOD SHE IN/
I AINT FEELIN HOW IT ENDED AND YOU WASNT FEELIN THE REALTIONSHIP/
ALL YOU HAD TO DO IS SAY IT, EXPRESSIN THRU VOICE IS BASIC/
I AINT BAGGONG, IM JUST SAYIN, YOU COULDA LET ME KNOW/
BEFORE NO CONTACT IN A WEEK OR SO AND TURNING OFF THE PHONE/
BUT ITS COO, YOU KNOW WHAT, IM A LET IT GO/
CKUZ YOU WILL RETURN, THIS I ALREADY KNOW/
MY MOMS TOLD ME BE A BIGGER PERSON, I DONT KNOW IF ITS POSSIBLE/
PLUS IM NOT GONNA LET 1 MONKEY STOP THE SHOW/
THEN YOU PROLLY GONNA EXPRESS TO ME THAT IM TRIPPIN/
CKUZ IM A TELL YOU ITS TOO LATE WHEN YOU COME TO YA SENSES/
THANKS FOR CLEANING MY LENSES IM SEEIN CLEARLY FA SHO/
THATS ONE LESS PERSON I HAVE TO INCLUDE WHEN ACCUMALATE MY DOUGH/
WITHOUT ILL MAKE IT, REGRET I WONT BE FACED WIT/
YOULL WANNA BE FRIENDS AGAIN AND ILL ALREADY HAVE A REPLACEMENT/
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Date Submitted: Aug 06, 2007 (11:56 PM)
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  HappySnappyAPD
08/20/07 (02:28 AM) 
Man... this is good. I must say, I can relate to this situation 100% just know that whenever you get big doing whatever you doing that you will always have those around who claim to be your friend. You're learning early to get rid of them if they are no good. Keep doing ya thang. :)

  nilla bean
08/15/07 (11:34 AM) 
Oh damn! so many hot lines in here..."thanks for cleaning my lenses", "one less person to include when i include my dough" man, you lit this one up!

  POOHBEARD
08/14/07 (02:48 PM) 
WOW I COULD TRULY RELATE TO THIS ONE ALLL THE WAY..MAN U SURE DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS AND IT HAD A NICE DIALECT TO IT BASICALLY ALL YOUR WRITES IVE READ SO FAR..BUT THIS WAS ANOTHER MAGNIFICENT WRITE FROM YOU..VERY NICE AND CONSISTENT! --LYRIC---

  Shira
08/12/07 (10:40 AM) 
I can so relate to this one! Man, I should really let some of my 'friends' read this one.. lol. Thats why I really keep a couple close friends and the rest are aquaintances.. less trouble. lmao. Great job with this one though. I'm glad that you're starting to see the situation with an up side now=]

  Lyricma
08/10/07 (10:25 AM) 
damn! I can so relate to this, thats whay i'm real careful wit dat friend label now!! I love this homie

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