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"Rescue Me"
  by **Poetri Jones**
  - This Poem is a response to the poem DRY CRY by ragga


Teardrops fall
Dry
to
Empty sounds of cries

Never to be heard
Never to be seen
Never to be caught

Internally am dying out

Wont you
Hold me
Under your strong wings
Comb my hair
Soothing my soul with love

See me
Carry me
Like a baby curled up in your arms
Past
The storm

Safely
Tucking
Me
In

Or

Will you let me
Splash
Into a thousand
Broken
Tear
Drops

Never to be Found
Never to be Rescued



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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2009 (06:25 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/27/09 (03:58 AM)
Author: Trill
Poem Title: Help

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comment icon  COMMENTS (16)
  Ulises
11/07/09 (06:03 PM) 
The image along with the song added to a great poem makes this a must read, alot of emotions flowing on this one,very nicely written Miss jones

  Preacher C
09/03/09 (03:12 AM) 
Very stilling. Makes you think...

  Embonpoint
07/26/09 (12:24 PM) 
Excellent piece PJ, I love the feeling it evoked within me. Lovely!

  Jody
07/26/09 (12:02 AM) 
it hurts that much more when we don't have another to help us through the storms... felt the emotions.

  stranger
07/25/09 (03:32 PM) 
Delicate and elegant expression of the yielding humility of yearning ,highlighting the exquisite pain and passion behind the deadlymistake of fogettuing that love can only be given, and without giving it one does die within ... since there are billions of people in most desperate need of love in this world it seems a mistake to starve in the sight of plenty just because one has come across one or more peopel whohave almost fogotten the meaning of love and its value [lest one follow them to th...
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