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"RESPONSE TO : I LIKE IT"
  by Debbie
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Like It by dontsaymacbeth


UHHH YEAH
I LIEK IT AND I'MA TELL YOU WHY
I'EE SEEND SOME CUTEST TO TIND TO THE SEXIEST DUDES
BUT THIS PARTICULAR ONE IS ON MY MIND
HE ALWAYS HAS FRESH CORN-ROLES, COLGATE SMILE, ALWAYS DRESSING NICE, AND MANNERLY MAN
I LIEK IT
YOU TELL ME YOU DON'T KEEP YOUR LOVE SECRET
YOU KEEP IT HONEST
OOO YEAH I'M FEELING YOU
YOU WERE ITHE FIRST ONE TO MAKE THE MOVE AND IMPRESSED ME
BUT YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO BUT SAID YOUR GONNA B MY REALITY
YOU SAID I ACN BE YORU QUEEN
YOU SAID DON'T WORRY ABOUT A THING CAUSE I'MA TAKE CARE OF WHO'S INTO ME
HE'S MY NEW CUPID
I DON'T CARE WHO THINKS ITS STUPID
I'M LIKING IT
GETTING EXCITED OVER THE LIL THINGS
I LIKE HOW HE SWEPT ME OFF MY FEET
HE ASKED THE CUTESET QUESTION TO ME, " WHY SHOULD A PRETTY GIRL BE WAIKING ON DIRT GROUND WHEN I(HE) CAN CARRY ME?"
HE'S NOT IN THE TYPE TO ARGUE
HE'S THE TYPE TO LOVE ME
HE ALWAYS ON TIM EFOR ME
SEE MY KINF OF GUY THAT STAYS THROUGH EVERYTHING AND KNOW HOW TO WORK THROUGH THINGS
NOTHNING IS PERFECT HE SURE KNOW HOW TO COME CLOSE
I LIEK IT WHEN HE CALLS ME BABY GIRL
HE SAYS WHENEVER I NEED HIM CALL HIM BY CUPID!
I LIKE IT!
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Date Submitted: Oct 13, 2009 (10:52 PM)
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