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"Revenge.. death list pt.1"
A Ncognito and ~~~Prettysugar10~~~ Collaboration


  ~~~Prettysugar10~~~:

she watches the double crossing murderer who took
her son's life away......
... Vicious senerio's of severe torture invade her mind...
the light from the triple beam
is begining to blur her vision..
pop pop pop!!!!
3 easy shots!
separate limbs........

walking up on a blood
fess
REVENGE still runs deep in her chest...
This half dead bitch
think it's over...
not until Miss Revenge
bags this hoe
and take her to the butcher...


  Ncognito:

I see this sexy assasin enter my shop with a bloody bag
When I looked at its contents, it almost made me gag
This chick was bleeding like she was on the rag

What is goin on miss, I only butcher cows and sows
She wanted me to dispose the body, I said "how"

I don't wanna be an accsessory to murder
I just cut meat, so people can eat a burger

She took the body out the bag, and told me to dismember
Then throw her in the giant stove, and let her remains burn like ember

I refused, then she put her gun to my head
So I got my razor sharp sickle, then I realized the body wasn't dead

  ~~~Prettysugar10~~~:

Aye kid... I know this is fucked up
invading your shop
so abrupt
demanding you to do things
your imagination has never touched...
so
let me extenuate the situation
and explain
this bitch & I acquaintance..
So sit the fuck down
no sudden moves
I murder for money
but I tend to break the rules......
Narrator:

As Revenge began to tell the story of how she ended up in this simple Butchers
shop, demanding him to become part of her twisted vengeance against this barely
breathless, less then human child murderer.

The young man had a look of
extreme nausea...

Revenge walked slowly to the slaughter woman with her bag of medical supplies..she takes out a blow torch, needle syringe filled with a solution that slows the bleeding and regulates the heart.
She only needed 35 minutes to allow this cunt to breathe and to let understand what will happen to her dismembered body...so as she start to apply medications and sedation
she talks to the man behind her, aware he is not going to move or try her patience...

What is your name kid?
He replies in a stutter " uh uh mmy my name is uh Pphil .My name is Phil maam"...
Well Phi...l this here blood clout is a former assailant of mine my " too eager Lil flunky"
To make a long story short.....


Contract for 50 mill
my last deal
I could'nt refuse the offer
My last damn kill!

The business was making
my heart turn to stone
had a Lil boy who was getting old
without his mother at home......

Boss says it would be a suicide mission if failed
I was attracted to the thrill,
the belligerent life of a assassin
is a numb hell....
Didn't know it was a set-up from a inside source ....

Made it to the assigned destination
over seas
"Yugoslavia , Europe "
to handle the deed,
disguised as a fashion model
played my part like a professional
actor......
Swiftly broke the code
entered the marks room......
nobody to murk ?
but
a
box
with
a
black balloon??

Mind went blank
felt instant pain
robotically opened it up
to find
a tape with my son's name
on it...

My heart was in Texas
living a normal life
the only good
I can
say I've done right!!
...................................I watched my known enemy
Eliminate my most secrete possession
Now can you see why my vengeance
are so wreck less?

  Ncognito:

I'm so sorry that your son's life was taken
Your cries are forsaken
Let me find my blood-stained apron

I'm glad u gave me the run down
I'm kinda stunned now
Can u please put the gun down

It seems as if u should go find your boss
It seems that he is responsible for your loss
But I will cut this body up for u to toss

U are too damn sexy to be so cold-blooded
I laid the body next to a cow I just gutted

The body started shakin, going into convulsions
After sliced her extremities, I felt a feeling of repulsion

I ignited my gas stove, then I deposited the remains
I had to pick up access particles of brains
After this night, my life would never be the same

  ~~~Prettysugar10~~~:

Phil, I can see the stress across you're face.....

I can't apologize
for what I do best.
I have nothing but hate left in my
soul
I will not
stop until
the last bitch mothafucka is GONE........


Take a look in that duffle bag
It holds 50 million dollars of cold hearted cash...
I will leave you to do whatever you choose
just remember that I may be back 2
finish off the rest of the crew............... to be continued ...The BOSS must be found!!!!

  Ncognito:

So she walked out my door, hell bent on revenge
Seems as if she was bout to go on a murder binge

50 million dollars, all to myself!!!!
I never dreamed of such wealth

Now I can have anything I desired
Fuck this butcher shop, I'm officially retired

I'm leaving this life behind me
I hope she'll never find me



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Date Submitted: Jan 13, 2008 (06:29 PM)
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  ~~~Prettysugar...
10/06/08 (11:59 PM) 
eh babe... im ready for part 2... get at me ... asap

  Ryze
08/06/08 (02:06 PM) 
Nice collab fa real... Most people can't work 2gether and create something of this caliber. Good Job, i'll b waiting to hear more...

  Jenesis
07/31/08 (11:25 AM) 
wow this was really really aweomse =) morbid, yet funny for real...haha definatly 10 starz and a fave of mine =)

  timesticking
07/14/08 (07:08 PM) 
where is pt 2????

  DiamondellaDeL...
07/13/08 (07:37 PM) 
"U are too damn sexy to be so cold-blooded I laid the body next to a cow I just gutted"<--umm the picture in my head says that aint lookin to sexy and far from a place to be layin it down lmfaooo...nice shit tho

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