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"Re(verse)Re(member)"
A ...Da Futurist Fort... and --- Collaboration


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Insanity is it?

If I ask that you
Empower me...

Probably...

Evidently it is

Honestly...

If you could be helpfully
Helping hands holding out hope
Could you handle me...

Hopefully?

Or would you...

Hinder me
Dismember me
Being...

Mentality mostly
Ending me in memory

Remember me
Please...

As passion-eternally
Individually- eternity
Visualizing-artistry
Filling gaps-dentistry
Causing reactions-chemistry
Kaleidoscopic imagery...

Be hope fully help
Don't hinder me...

I haven't caused any injuries
Hurting pride infused with ignorance
Doesn't happen to be sin to me...

Even if I wanted it to be...

All in all ya'll kin to me
Trapped within walls befriending me

Socially...
Scraping scrapping scribing
Striving surviving...

But some beings behind
still blind...

Me hoping they see
So we can all be free mentally

But it wouldn't hurt if you
Remembered...

Me

  ...Da Futurist Fort...:

Seriously

Waiting for audience applause
Hoping my prose was criminally
Void of laws broke principalities

Raw {reverse} war was me

Fully scribed read virtually

Vibe

Forget personal me

Reflect on concepts of personality
Pen smeared soliloquies
Till quill skill bleed lead emptied

In 30 minutes fountains literally
Poured, grains of infinity

No limits, eternity
No gimmicks, definitely

Undiluted, totally expressed me
Impressed comrades collectively
Asking Da Fort---who is he

Fuck me like tight pussy
The actuality
I created
Feels like the ink fornicated ---intensely

Imagery coded --mysteriously
Committed devoted --righteously
Poetry is my religion

If Im slipping

On penmanship
Worship
Or traditions

Extraordinary poets
Critique me
Or disfellowship me

Please

Mentally--
Creating for centuries
So even if you whisper --quaintly
Celebrating my metaphoric memories

Exultantly--
Im forever breathing ---metaphysically

No apologies
For my anatomy of analogies
Egoistically--
Qualities coax & betrayed me
Like a stool pigeons mirror-- clearly
Sold me out for all to see

Conserve energy--
Surrealistically -- categorize me
Internally--
In your hearts of hearts -- amicably
Spit out a line of mine --causally

Say Da Fort was a cosmic cadet in S.P.A.C.E

So every verse --considerably
Reverses assumptions contradictory
Maybe--
Youll have to swallowin reality
Your malfunctioned hypocrisy

Damn
Do you want to remember ME?







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Date Submitted: Apr 17, 2008 (12:00 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Yas
04/17/08 (09:03 PM) 
togther you two always bring that fire...."as passion-eternally indvidually-eternity..." loved this

  Candice STone
04/17/08 (10:50 AM) 
this is very deep

  mariposa
04/17/08 (05:14 AM) 
very introspective even tho written by two different pens... the mental flow is thought-provoking to readers..... visualizing artistry when you both have given us imagery coded... yeah, i like this....

  D.K Lord of Da...
04/17/08 (02:19 AM) 
AND I STEP INTO THE WORLD OF TWO TOP ASS POETS WHO WHEN DEY DO DARE TING DEY BLOW YOU AWAY.. DIS IS JUS REAL.. YOU DRAW EACH OTHERS THOUGHT PROCESS .. NICE COMBINATION THE TWO OF YOU WORKING TOGETHER..JUS SHOWING THE GS FAM HOW A COLLAB CAN BE DONE..WORTH 10 MILLION STARS FROM ME MA BROTHA KEEP DEM PENS MOVING.. PLS MORE FROM YA BOTH...

  STYLES C.
04/17/08 (01:36 AM) 
As passion-eternally Individually- eternity Visualizing-artistry Filling gaps-dentistry Causing reactions-chemistry Kaleidoscopic imagery... <-----and----->Imagery coded --mysteriously Committed devoted --righteously Poetry is my religion .... flawless.. Thought provoking ... Jewels

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