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"REWIND..."
  by MAVRICK


I took a trip down memory lane
trying to see where I’ve been
and how did I come to my many conclusions
various areas of my life that may have been delusions
and the others that I know were definitely confusions

Travelled down many roads that read DEAD END
retraced my steps trying to find my way back again
rushing sometimes, as if it were a race that I could win
but lost because of the blind emotional rut that I was in

Managed to regain some of the mind that was lost
limping along, missing an arm and a leg, which was the cost
backed up into dark corners, having to fight my way out with force
bloodied, battered and beaten, I healed and found another course

And then forgot there was alot that I didn’t want to remember
sad, hurtful, angry, brutally cold winter memories, my symbolic December
my past invading my present, stifling my progress, wounds still must be tender
even forgot why the hell I started this damn trip...It’s Time To Change Lanes!
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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (05:40 PM)
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  vandal
07/04/09 (03:44 PM) 
im feeling this piece fella, nicely done..

  BSavvy
11/26/08 (12:31 PM) 
Rings a bell for me, sometimes we have to take that trip down memory lane to remember what actually wasn't forgotten just supressed. Then feel all those past hurts then you realize your mistakes and like you said time to change lanes....... All of mine.

  blaque
11/20/08 (08:30 AM) 
very beautiful write as always Mr Mavrick...10 stars all day long-be blessed [♥]

  J3LLYB3AN
11/20/08 (06:40 AM) 
deff a good way to share how changes can be hard or good and that in the end you may come up wif a few scars but its inevitable and only make you stronger

  African Queen
11/20/08 (04:20 AM) 
Change can be good only if its for the better and as my sis OM says it is mandatory...this is definitely something some of us can relate to...*two thumbs up*

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