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"RING ON WHAT...."
  by bbeauty
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Put A Ring On It by icnicn2004


RING ON WHAT?
HE PUT A RING ON IT AND HE’S STILL OUT CHEATING,CREEPING, AND LYING WITH SISTA SALLY. THE NEW CHURCH CONVERT.SHE’S SINING PRAISES TO GOD AND SPEAKING IN THE DEVIL’S TONGUES WITH MY HUSBAND.THE RING IS THE SYMBOL OF COMMITMENT, LOYALTY,FAITHFULNESS ,……HONESTY….WRAP UP IN ENTERNITY. OTHERS BELIEVE
MARRIAGE IS A DEATH SENTENCE………THE BALL AND CHAIN EXERPERIENCE………..SOME MEN AREN’T MARRIAGE MATERIAL. THEY WILL ALWAYS BE THE STAY CATS CRYING HUNGRY ROAMING AROUND EATING FROM ANY AND EVERY WILLING PUSSYCAT IN THE BACK ALLEY.
ONLY THE SERIOUS MINDED SHOULD ATTEMPT THE SANCTITY OF MARRIAGE.PUTTING A RING ON IT IS A JOKE IF YOU’RE NOT FAITHFUL……


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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (06:36 PM)
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  icnicn2004
07/06/09 (02:15 PM) 
I totally agree with you. There is no need of putting a ring on anybody's finger if you are not going to be faithful. I also agree that some men aren't marriage material. Some women aren't marriage material either. It's also no point of waisting anybody's time...if you're not going to be faithful then don't even propose. Nice poem response.

  *~Raw Sensuali...
07/04/09 (07:27 PM) 
THE TRUTH REVEALED....NUF SAID

  Chainz.
07/04/09 (06:37 PM) 
damn, that's deep you sound angry in this piece good write for real though expressing how you feel 10 stars no doubt

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