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""RISE""
  by Gillian Rivera




WHAT THE FUCK???
WAKE ME UP, I CAN'T WAKE UP.
CALL MY NAME AND SAVE ME FROM MYSELF
WHAT THE FUCK
IN MY PERSONAL HELL.
I'M GOING UNDER,
AND YOU ASK, WHY?
MY WORDS ARE HOW I CRY
THE NIGHT PULLS LIKE THUNDER
ALL YOU SEE IS THE PAIN IN MY EYES
CAN YOU HEAR ME CRY?
DONT HELP ME OUT, YOU LET ME HIDE.
WHY?
DAMNIT AT LEAST..TRY.
DONT SIT THERE ASSUME & MAKE UP LIES.
LIES BASED ON YOUR THOUGHTS
...JUSTIFIED.
HELP ME RISE.
INSIDE I HAVE TO HIDE.
CAN'T ASK FOR HELP.
JUST SOOTH AWAY THE WELTS.
WHY?
I DONT KNOW.
THE VOICES CHASED AWAY MOST OF THE SANITY IN ME.
AM I TOO LOST TO BE SAVED?
IS IT BECAUSE TO YOU, I FIND IT HARD TO BEHAVE?
PLEASE HELP ME FIND A WAY.
MY NAILS SCRAPE THE WINDOWS & DOORWAYS...
BUT ITS WRONG JUST BECAUSE ITS NOT YOUR WAY.
NICE...REALLY NICE.
ITS NOT YOUR FAULT.
BUT...SLOWLY...
SLOWLY I'VE DIED
I'M GOING UNDER.
THE SMILES ARE A LIE, THERES NOTHING INSIDE.
I CAN'T WAKE UP, HEAR MY CRIES.
CALL MY NAME,
HELP ME RISE.
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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2007 (02:54 AM)
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  theycallmelife
12/03/07 (10:07 AM) 
More intensity...more passion and confusion...emotional struggles...i suppose if it is love then your lover is worth being saved without having to ask you...something you should at least be trying to do...any relationship for that matter...any way im growing fond of your intensity

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