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"Rock Bottom"
  by Mizunderstood


My atmosphere has become the reflection of my heart.. Stone for stone i lie in a pit..trying 2 climb out but know where to start.. Bc i done hit ROCK BOTTOM over u. In this bottomless pit i sit.. Trying 2 figure out how ima get over u.. I tried going around cuz i cant seem to get through.. To u.. That without u.. Im missing pieces of myself.. If i had all the money in the world but dont have u.. I have no wealth...u make me feel like love favors only the aces of heart..so where should we start.. I really dont care as long as wen im finished u're there... Wen i was falling 4 u i was unaware.. C i let my guard down.. My heart lost friction got slippery lost its balance fell and hit rock bottom 4 u... Now i sit here gazing at a distant sky without a clue.. I rearrange my pebbles as a means of escape...took the first steps but began to debate.. should i leave or should i stay? In deep thought i lost my way... Find myself right bak where i began trying to figure out wat to do.. Cuz i done hit rock bottom over u


Rock Bottom - Pleasure P. Ft. Lil Wayne
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Date Submitted: May 31, 2009 (10:15 PM)
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  Chocolate City
06/22/09 (04:14 PM) 
awww.. now this was soo cute.. its sincere.. fallen hard for someone and hittin rock bottom..u spilled on this poem.. nice way to capture your feelings and express em..

  big josh
06/07/09 (03:24 PM) 
these were nice qustione to ask yourself an dI know sometimes its hard to find th eanswers you just hav eto keep trying, nice write :

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