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"Rose-Colored Glasses..."
  by TS


After contemplating ways to express how i feel
I realized the best way would be to..

Manifest your brainwaves
And morse-code my way into your mind
Hiding behind the music you hear
Between the bass in your favorite song
And the beat that your head unconsciously bops to
So in a sense you'd be nodding yes
To my every question
I guess that would be tricking you into agreeing
That our love does make the best music...

Or maybe if i were to synchronize myself with the hands on your watch
I could ((tick,tock)) my emotions in your ears
Whispering to you my deepest desires
And flashing you with clips of what i want to do to you...Around the clock
Spreading my arms every chance i get
To be able to embrace you 24 times a day
And alarming you everytime you forget
That my love is going to last longer than the sands of time...

To get my message across I'd polish myself into the single diamond you rock
on your left ear...
Shining my thoughts straight into your ears
Reflecting what was with how i wish things would gleam
Cuz i mean
I cant seem to smile this way for anyone else but you
And baby at times the hardest things in life
Are the only ones worth fighting for
So if i were to be imprisoned in the crimson of your diamond
I would uncontrollably send subliminal messages into your mind
So that you could agree on trying with me
This thing one more time....

And ive never been more determined to make things work
And if i had to seep into your bone marrow...I would
Inscribing in each blood cell my love
So that they swim directly to your heart
Intoxicating you with optimism
Because i can understand why this situation has filled you with disillusions ...
But trust me...After this blood transfusion


I'll be able to paint your sky blue again
I'll part seas and show you that its ok to believe in us
I'll plants seeds and watch trees grow and bloom
Because if i had to grow a green thumb
I would dye both my hands the color of grass
And water us every day
Until our branches reach the sun...
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Date Submitted: Feb 05, 2008 (01:53 AM)
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  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
04/16/08 (04:04 PM) 
lol yo...u already kno this goes hard...but just the way u expressed urself in an effortless way...ur wordplay...lol wow queen..truly a beautiful write and wonderful piece 2 read...

  azzurablue
04/16/08 (12:48 AM) 
Girlfriend the emotions in this runs deep and you wrote it beautifully.I can't point out a fave stanza cuz i loved it all.

  Shy Gyrl
04/02/08 (12:39 PM) 
Wow...u always impress me with ur poetry. Nothings ever the same.The last 3 lines are i think the deepest. Yes, Yes...the message has been translated...amen

  Unxpectedgift
03/21/08 (04:42 PM) 
oooh I like this... beautifully composed. pasi'on is deep thought provoking and I know women can relate to the thought given here... -Daigft

  Level
02/25/08 (09:53 PM) 
Very nice write TS "imprisoned in a crimson diamond" don't know what that means but it sounds hot. You got a lot of power in this piece. Hypnotizing cats through earrings?Hiding in music? seeping in bone? writing on blood cells? Damn imagine if you didn't like him..scared of you Dom..I mean TS '

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