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"Roses Of Love"
  by Lady_Style


In his hand he holds a dozen roses,
that he wants to present to the woman he adores,
he'd do anything to make her happy,
to him she's worth givin his life for.
He's waited so long jus to be able to say,
how much his love has grown each n every day,
by the phone they would talk,
through the pen they would show,
jus how far for eachother,
they were prepared to go.

A bond built over time that wasn't planned,
it was one of those beautiful things that jus happened,
as their fingers tapped the keys,
or dialled the numbers,
they supported eachother,
through all the strains they were under,
they talked about life as it was in general,
and how they planned on makin improvements,
to make life more satisfyin and enjoyable,
with they're skills they would make movements.

So much in common that fell into place,
like pieces of a puzzle they sat well together,
eachothers reason to have smiles upon their face,
a friendship built to last forever.
Time went on and didn't stand still,
everytime they talked,
conversation was fresh and new.
Two years passed and emotions were high,
when one day she said she had a date,
painful tears filled his eyes.

To his advantage the date didn't go well,
and she was still a single woman,
he knew he had to take a risk,
and explain how he was feelin.
One day in conversation he let it all flow free,
"baby girl i can't hide it no more,
i love you n want you to be wit me"
Her eyes glued to the screen,
she was over joyed at what she saw,
she gently tapped the keys that read,
"i've often wondered what it would feel like,
to be wrapped in love such as yours"

A journey across the ocean,
to finally unite them as one,
they found love at a distance,
but now all emptyness is gone.
He waits patiently for her to arrive,
as he stands wit roses in hand,
his plan is to make her his wife,
and finally show her love from a real man.

The roses he holds are red,
and in the middle is one fake & white,
this one is his promise to her,
that he'll love her for the rest of his life.
As he presents the roses,
he looks deep within her eyes...
"i promise you baby with all of my heart,
i will love you until the last one dies"
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (01:29 PM)
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  (Floetic~One) ...
11/08/09 (11:24 PM) 
very beautifully written... i enjoyed reading this to the very end... loved the ink xx

  NeshaW1
11/07/09 (06:17 PM) 
beautiful:) im just amazed and...idk how to explain this..this is so beautiful and touching..i wish one day that sum1 would do the same for me..this was absolutely brilliant..keep that ink flowin..

  JOSKI
11/07/09 (03:36 PM) 
Wow a very endearing love story you scribe here bigg up on the scribe lady

  G.A.
11/07/09 (03:25 PM) 
Niiiiiiice!!! I loved this one to the fullest.. You painted a beautiful story with this one.. It shows you can find love anywhere as love has no distance or any limits... Great write

  Hart N. Soul
11/07/09 (03:20 PM) 
This is a real pretty piece right here. Sometimes this is how you gotta do it. Pure and simple just put it out there. Lovely picture with the happy ending. Looking forward to another one from you.

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