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"(rs,,to,grr;omhtiy) falsetto submission II"
  by 11th Wonduh


(((grown folkpoetry)))

subconscious desires
extinguishing
H20
intimately repels
tantalizing
fires
.
caramel product
brownsuguh
cocaine
relapse
inevitably falling
.
epilogues, passage
reads l/ a
zane novel
creme & chocolate heels,
exhibiting lustfully
in matching
creme
perimeters
dipped in caramel
beautifulnuss
so
muthafuckin
sexy
.
brickhouse stallion
sojourns
into the room, florescent lighting
exchanged w/
jamaican flames,
insatiably
singin
"there's somethin in your
eyes baby,
tellin me you been wantin
me lately.
tonight is your
night"
.
temptations of eve,
essence inhibits salaciously
succinct levels
of
insurrection
marble flooring
echoes
her 5 inch
stillettos
.
illuminated
creator's sculpture
is unveiled
thicknuss,
so
muthafuckin'
beautiful
.
.
invites me to exquisitely sample her body buffet
succulent 38d's w/ caramel raindrops
succinctly dipped, drips
.
creating tributaries circlin round her stomach
beautifulnuss
so
muthafuckin
sexy
.
as
i
graciously take sips
intimately
she quips
.
i know you
wanna
fuck me
fuck me
hard, passionately
slow, dirty
uncut
.
divide these
thighs w/ forceful
intentions
((pause))
i want you
to fuck
me
w/ forceful
intentions
.
truth is, we can passionately
make love
anytime we
please
tonight, however,
we
fuckin

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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 (03:29 AM)
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  J skillz
07/28/08 (05:03 PM) 
as i read this peice the words gave light of a carribean accent. this is an excellent intellegent write., oh and the image is great

  XPERIENCE
07/22/08 (07:57 AM) 
oooo and the song...well i wont go there.. LOL

  XPERIENCE
07/22/08 (07:56 AM) 
mmmm! u make me miss our good ole collabin days..we must do that again..."brickhouse stallion sojourns into the room, florescent lighting exchanged w/ jamaican flames, insatiably singin " sounds like me LOL...nicely done..very sexy

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