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"~ rubbing sticks ~"
  by a fallen angel
  - This Poem is a response to the poem THE HEAT by JIGGABYRD


Where smoke is there's fire
Like virtuously rubbing
two sticks together

Watching them smolder
Gently blowing as it heats
Sparks enjoy friction

Growing in-between
Heating ... Warming more... Almost
Steady .....don't stop now

Going to combust
Burst internally into flames
Setting it on fire

Enjoying the heat
Created just to please ....you
Until it's no more



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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (11:43 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Moz' Wizdom
08/22/08 (05:50 PM) 
Loved the flow in this piece! HOTTTT indeed! Very Nice write!

  TRU-IN-DEED
08/20/08 (11:17 PM) 
you so nasty lmao but yea this was cute - T.I.D.

  .Mase Da Rula.
08/20/08 (08:57 PM) 
i smell hate fumin off this one.... from no 1 reading it this was cool....loved it

  D.K. ( aka Dar...
08/20/08 (05:45 PM) 
PHEW MAMMA DIS WAS FIYAH.....LIKE DA WAY IT CAME TOGETHER .. NICE DROP.. DK

  JIGGABYRD
08/19/08 (11:46 PM) 
now that was hot! like how it... climaxed. lmao. nice drop.

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