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"Russian Roulette"
  by ARCH ANGEL


6-shooter
With 5 in the chamber
I want this to end
I want to stop these dreadful anger

Putting the hammer back
Bidding the world farewell
Spinning the barrel
Like a carnival carousel

Placing the magnum to my dome
Now my thoughts are fully loaded
No sugar coating
Tormented from mental erosion

Finger steady on the trigger
As my fingers slowly slips
Hammer hits barrel
It was a dud round ***click***
Fates game I played
Seems I conquered it
But I dnt wanna live
So Ill pull it again for the hell of it

**bang**
(Body drops)
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (07:12 AM)
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  Dimplez
07/04/09 (11:59 PM) 
*jaw hitting the ground* this is hot yo, you painted quite a picture! dayum

  *~Raw Sensuali...
07/04/09 (07:05 PM) 
You must have WANTED me to be bothered the rest of the day huh? Stop home and check in...and this is what I read :( I don't like it....no I don't....

  Night Crawler
07/04/09 (06:41 PM) 
this is one hell of a visual piece , the imagery is awesome & the way it unfolds is great " Finger steady on the trigger As my fingers slowly slips Hammer hits barrel It was a dud round ***click*** Fates game I played Seems I conquered it But I dnt wanna live So Ill pull it again for the hell of it **bang** (Body drops) " .. great piece

  harley quinn/a...
07/04/09 (05:11 PM) 
hmmmm...... intresting ....but i like the way ya layed it out

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