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"Sadly Neva Afta"
  by LadyMay16


I just wanted to
Wrap you in arms forever
And that didn’t work
So I decided
To rain kisses on your soul
Yet my lips slipped off
Due to your tear drops
Staining the core of your heart
Leaving residue
Of past relations
Making you shut out good ones
Forever causing
Turmoil within “us”
So instead of fighting I
Let go what we had
Making love seem gone
And what we had seem like a
Faze I couldn’t shake
Realizing that
Our hearts molded together
Looping the problems
Out of existence
Even if for that moment
But somehow for us
It always came back
And finding out happy
Was never after




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Date Submitted: Mar 10, 2009 (03:24 PM)
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  big josh
08/27/09 (11:11 PM) 
this was an excellent piece. nice.

  TheArtist07
04/14/09 (08:30 AM) 
i feel for you in a way..knowing that you give you heart and soul, then all of it is twisted, and your left flat..happiness will follow my dear and patience will be the leader to it..God-sent that is..This haiku was well-executed because as I've known you, the use of your soul's emotions brings forth great power..nicely done

  (Floetic~One) ...
04/04/09 (11:58 AM) 
this one iz beautifully expressed... you're definitely the queen of haikus... keep that pen hot! 10 starz

  after vision
03/26/09 (11:52 AM) 
Due to your tear drops Staining the core of your heart Leaving residue Of past relations Making you shut out good ones Forever causing Turmoil within “us” -- this is my new easter speech -- feeling ya on this

  BlessedOne
03/22/09 (12:56 PM) 
I had to come back because I didn't realize that this was a string haiku! It read so smoothly and you linked it all together beautifully! Bravo

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