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"saggiN"
  by Browngrl86


inconceivable unbelieveables,
stuffin ish into cerebrals
diseasin mentalities
like brain tumors.
rainin rumors
that we gotta be
fools for profit,
causin distortions
& cultural abortions.
dollar almighty
reignin over ignorant bliss
choking perceptions w/ a fist:
of women
looser
than a baby tooth,
of men
w/ pimp mentalities,
chopped up & feedin
the youth:
be a P.I.M.P &
make an objective,
Put
In
More
Perspective
the orgins of your actions.
pimp,
fed to emulate,
once bonded human studs
bred to impregnate.
blood diamond chains hang low
like ropes swingin from trees,
human pendulums
danglin black bodies
swayin in da breeze.

awareness saggin
like britches on a bony behind
saggin
a word to describe
a style of the times.
subject matter prone to attack words
but wus da correlation
when saggin is spelled backwards?
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Date Submitted: Jul 26, 2007 (08:28 PM)
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  BIG CHIEF
03/30/08 (01:35 PM) 
---BUT WUS DA CORRELATION WHEN SAGGIN IS SPELLED BACKWARDS---SAGGIN,,NIGGAS,,WOW..THIS RIGHT HERE IS HOTT ..LUV DA METAPHORS IN THIS CONCEPT..AND YOUR FLOW WAS FIRE TOO.TEN STARZZ..PEACE AND HAIR GREASE

  Lyrical Butter...
10/02/07 (01:57 PM) 
I DEFINITELY LOVE YOUR METAPHORS... "LIKE BRITCHES" ON A BONY BEHIND"

  TeeBee
08/02/07 (12:30 PM) 
Yeessssssssssssssssssssssss! This is what I've been trying to say for so long...and you said it well. You are good! I like the way you gave another meaning for P.I.M.P. and it's is sad that our women are becoming looser than a tooth...and I like how you state that blood diamonds hanging around the neck. You touched so many points in this write. The old age saying..just spell saggin backworks...and you get niggas! Well done!

  Jonathan Robin...
07/26/07 (08:30 PM) 
food for thought...mentally provoking. I'm defintely thinking the very depths of my soul with this. 10 stars

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