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"SAME HEART ACHES +SAME STRUGGLES...=SAME POEMS...(OVER AND OVER AGAIN)"
  by LADY HYPNOTIC


EVERY POEM I READ IS THE SAME..DATZ SUMTHIN I GOTTA ADMIT
I GUESS NIGGAZ WORLDWIDE BE GOIN THRU THA SAME SHIT....
WHEN I HOP ON GS AND READ SUMTHIN ABOUT LOVE
IT JUS LEAVES ME RIGHT THERE WITH NOTHIN TO THINK OF....
CUZ USUALLY IT GOES A LIL BIT LIKE THIS
(I FELT HIS SOFT LIPS AS HE GAVE ME A KISS
EMBRACED IN HIS ARMS..I LOOKED INTO HIS EYES
FINALLY A RELATIONSHIP WITH NO DECEIT AND LIES)....
THEN IT GOT THE NIGGAZ WHO LADIEZ DOIN EM WRONG
SO THEY WANNA KILL THEMSELVES INSTEAD OF BEING STRONG
(JOHN DOE..18...WAS BORN IN THE GHETTO
BLEW HAZE...GOT PAID..GOT LAID IN THE GHETTO...
HE FELL IN LOVE WITH A STRIPPER, BUSSED HER ASS IN STELETTOS
THO HE DID HER RIGHT...SHE FELL IN LOVE WITH OTHER FELLOWS
UNDER THE STRESS AND THE PRESSURE
AND THE WEIRD SMELL ON HER SWEATER
HE BROKE DOWN AND WROTE THIS SUICIDAL LETTER)...
I WAS TRYNA MAKE DAT SOUND WHACK...BUT I THINK YALL GET MY DRIFT
BASICALLY IM TRYNA SAY POETRY IS A GIFT...
IM JUS DISAPPOINTED..THANK GOD FOR THE PEOPLE ON MY FAV LIST
CUZ THA OTHA ISH I BE READIN...DAMN...I RATHER SLIT MY WRISTS..
WRITE SOMETHING DIFFERENT...SO DAT ITZ NOT REALLY EXPECTED
THEN IN THE PROCESS PEOPLE FEELINGS WILL BE REFLECTED....
YOUR WORDS WILL NO LONGER BE NEGLECTED
IT'LL BE RESPECTED.....
SO BEFORE YOU CLICK "SUBMIT"..FORM SOME TYPE OF FOUNDATION
GET SOME INSPIRATION....AND MAKE SURE YOU HAVE CONCENTRATION....
MAYBE THEN YOU'LL MAKE FRONT PAGE AND I'LL TELL U "CONGRATULATIONS"
REAL TALK PEOPLE....TAKE THIS IN CONSIDERATION.....
SAME HEARTACHES + SAME STRUGGLES= SAME POEMS...BUT WE HAVE -DIFFERENT PERSONALITIES-
I THINK THAT'S ALL WE NEED TO WRITE SOMETHING WITH ORIGINALITY....
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Date Submitted: May 13, 2007 (03:19 PM)
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  TRAETRAE12
03/13/08 (10:18 AM) 
this this.. im speechless. i love it. because alot of peoples poems indeed are about the same things!

  Buddah
02/24/08 (12:10 AM) 
FUCKIN LOVEIN IT!!!!!

  Lady E
02/22/08 (03:50 PM) 
i liked dis 7 starz

  T.R.I.G.G.U.S.
07/28/07 (04:02 PM) 
must admit, i've written about the cliched tragic love experience. though in my views i've tried to bring some creativity to the issue. but i have stumbled across many that seem to all tackle that idea with methods all cut from the same tree. much respect to the reality you bring in this write to allow more creativity to seep through. good stuff here.

  Neurotically I...
07/28/07 (02:49 PM) 
gurk yiy are veeery write...it does get old after a while man..nice write

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