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"samurai darts pt III"
  by 11th Wonduh



depth of a
wound is

"determined"

w/ the sharpness
of a syllabic spear

"depth"

of a poet's word,
when precisely thrown

esoterically impales
your (sub) conscious

"other's"

say they spit,
but they flicker spit

hopin to
catch

"a fire"

wind up
catchin spit in the

"wind"






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Date Submitted: Jul 07, 2009 (01:29 AM)
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  TheUltimateCur...
07/08/09 (01:15 PM) 
Its like several little Haiku's rolled into one! good job son! heavy!!! faved!

  Something Beau...
07/08/09 (10:01 AM) 
Those last lines are so raw, bro! I couldn't read that silently, too much emotion to keep quiet. I've read this countless times, and each time I find myself amazed by a different part of the piece. Bravo

  --->QUEENPIN O...
07/07/09 (05:12 PM) 
YES YES YES!!!!!!! ""other's" say they spit, but they flicker spit hopin to catch "a fire" wind up catchin spit in the "wind" <---SO FUCKIN DOPE AND I LMAO @ THAT LINE CUZ IT IS SO TRUTH FILLED...

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