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"Save A Place"
  by Queso
  - This Poem is a response to the poem You and I=We by RawReincarnated


Save a place for me
between current and who yu wish to be
cunning though i am i respect your v
Because I'm a virgin to a virgin
But ill let yu get inside of me
and you can have the essence of my vacinity
id never play you like varsity
id rather have your junior bother me
and tend to your flaws cautiously
because i care tru-ly
and i mite end up too deep
but if i do
hopefully ill be in the place yu saved me
but if not
the obituary will read
"he died of heart failure due to she..
so he passed heartless in his sleep"
a sad stor-y
but dont mind me
ill just be
in that place you saved me
gravy minus y plus e
dig me?
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Date Submitted: Jan 05, 2009 (07:42 AM)
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  Sunkissed25
08/23/09 (10:54 AM) 
this response is genius!!!

  *Jazique*
06/19/09 (02:10 AM) 
this is different, but i love it...love the feeling i get from it...great job and emotions

  Maxine
04/09/09 (12:13 PM) 
Beautiful heartspeak! Love it!

  *~Raw Sensuali...
02/16/09 (10:38 PM) 
Yo...this is dope baby...I just realized it was even here...I was without internet for a month so I missed out on this...your wordplay is so insane...I love it...those last two lines are that good shit... I was smilin' @ the ingenuity of it... outstanding response luv...

  Moey
02/16/09 (10:50 AM) 
ok wow. i loved this. that was really nice..i might have to fav this. 10**

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