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"Savoring Your Milk Chocolate......"
  by ♥Lique'n Poetic Fluid♥


“You make me want to Hershey ‘s kiss your licorice…….”- India Arie

You are my milk chocolate
Fresh out the pack, cocoa brown……. I’m lost in you
Want to feel you in my oral cavities
Because just like those M&M’s you don’t melt in my hands
You melt in my insides, and I love the way you taste in my mouth
Mixing your smooth chocolate on top of my peanut butter
Reese’s cup….. Goodness is what it feels like
You make me want to savor you like a Snickers bar
Place you in my mouth from the chocolate outer coating
All the way down to the almond nuts, to that caramel tip
Until I’m craving to taste your creamy center
You got me yearning………
And I’m not going to be satisfied until that velvety chocolate
Releases something slightly salty, like those peanuts in a Mr. Goodbar
It is Nutrageous the things that you have my mind going through
Just to get one simple, delectable Hershey’s Kiss from you
Got me ready to stand out on 5th Avenue all day
So I can get a glance at your chocolate Bliss
You have been absorbed in all of my senses
And….. I want …….to taste you
Slowly put you in my mouth
While I do some things with my tongue that can’t even be described in words
We will just call it Whatchamacallit
Because I am ready to hear a sweet Symphony in my ear
As I taste you from your malted milk balls that I have named my Whoppers
And run my tongue back up your Milky Way bar …….
Because something about it gets me lost in outer space
And I am not willing to come down until I can place my hands…
On that chocolate coated skin that you have …..and devour you
Give my mouth something refreshing like a York peppermint pattie
….and all this came from the simple fact that I love your caramel coated chocolate skin

“you know I love your brown skin……. “- India Arie

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Date Submitted: Oct 07, 2008 (07:39 PM)
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  11th Wonduh
10/24/08 (11:13 PM) 
dare i say, that this write was deliciously insatiable. again, i love when i can read writes like this and use the imagination from the writers point of view. also this piece was very, very, very sexy. nuff said

  Poetrys Erotic...
10/11/08 (01:11 AM) 
wow. I dont even kno what to say. Str8 10 queen.

  Ordained Misfi...
10/08/08 (02:32 PM) 
Dang nutrageous... what is happening in that mind of yours Lique? You didn't leave much out... this was a most delicious write honey

  Harmony07
10/08/08 (01:31 AM) 
damn chica!!! u effin killt the dayum chocolate barz...yo ass might as well be Willetta Wonka wit all da candy u put in this sheeit here! but it'd be for ADULTZ only wit this erotic ish!!! lmfao *lovin the india arie song tho!*

  Red Dragon
10/07/08 (10:53 PM) 
swwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeettt. This is absolutly my favorite erotic metaphor you put together and you perfected THAT particular metaphor as if you originated. I mean DAMN. This deserves a good responce you'll be hearing from me soon (hopefully)

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