.
Your letters have been read thru dyslexic eyes
Making it hard to fathom reality’s final request
Shortened breaths begin to hiccup all the whys & the lies
Almost puncturing my lungs..
..to take a stab @ where my love rest.
Now..
There are cowardly revelations try to avoid perceived reactions
Assuming the pain inflicted from words will last
What was once a union is down to nothing..
..easy subtraction
Matches can now be struck..
..so I can watch a history turn into ash.
Only if..
These combustible concerns were inflammable
Each & every
Or
You & I
Could share blown wishes sealed with a kiss
Instead I’m left to answer questions you thought were inevitable
While you remain distant…
..to assure you’re not the one to wipe tears off my lips.
Just like a bitch..
But that’s you though..
I must grow to show colors you almost faded away
And allow others to discover the concrete rose if pursued
I’m single for reasons known..
..due to unfortunate circumstances is what I’ll say
Maybe one day I’ll share a piece of my mind..
..until then
..in a classy way
FUCK YOU..
Will be relayed cuz it’s the right thing to do..
There is a underlying message in this piece. The dreams ppl invest in a moment called forever can be as transient and superficial as the pen and paper it's written on. "
I must grow to show colors you almost faded away
And allow others to discover the concrete rose if pursued
I’m single for reasons known..
..due to unfortunate circumstances is what I’ll say
Maybe one day I’ll share a piece of my mind.. "----->tht glow should never die because the promise it used to shine for left the room ... [+]more
There is a underlying message in this piece. The dreams ppl invest in a moment called forever can be as transient and superficial as the pen and paper it's written on. "
I must grow to show colors you almost faded away
And allow others to discover the concrete rose if pursued
I’m single for reasons known..
..due to unfortunate circumstances is what I’ll say
Maybe one day I’ll share a piece of my mind.. "----->tht glow should never die because the promise it used to shine for left the room empty and desolate...perfect pic for this piece, and AB signed, sealed, and delivered this moment perfectly. As always, this is mastered ink. [-]collapse
mike you pen so beautifully...even when the poem becomes emotional and the character must say "FUCK YOU.. " in a classy way...i could def. relate to the feelings mapped out in this piece...very nice
i was really diggin this joint and this drop sounds like sum shit i wud say! "..until then
..in a classy way
FUCK YOU.. " u killed it wit that verse! keep that pen hand movin mike b
you know i remember you tellin me one time that i had different way of expressing emotions...kind of conversation type ish...but thats exactly how this one comes out....like i can really hear the words being expressed to the person they are speaking to...this was a classic piece...excellent job!!
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