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"(Season Finale) Chocolatecoffeshoplaxation"
  by Esoteric


Everyday - Jamiroquai















*SIGHS*


manifesting poetic expressions,
from poetic depression
painful blues,
to
colorful, visual hues

Intoxicated off a broken heart,Malcolm's rage
and a smooth Langston Hughes

I'm the encrypted words to Mile's jazz tunes

The Fahrenheit to Love's aroma
Obsession perfume
I assume

*stop and breathe for a second*

"now resume"





j*BB%r!sh tends
to leak from my pen
when
there is not a single word to express my feelings

no bat cave
no red phone in the glass case
only a star distant from astronomy
praying to God
because Grey's anatomy couldn't give me heeling's



*stop and breathe.....you losing them kid*

"get back to your dealings"


is this poetry?
or
po-e-trying to be a poet?

verbally,venting
frequently,fucking
lustful,literature like
a
hoet?


*shrugs*

regardless of what you consider it
it sure feel's good getting it
out my system


lyrically disturbing groove's
on sleepers like
the sys.....


Fuck it!

you can finish this write
I'm just not in the mood right now
(sorry to leave you hanging)

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Date Submitted: Feb 04, 2009 (06:39 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 06/14/09 (03:28 AM)
Author: jamiah
Poem Title: The finished version

Date: 02/04/09 (08:57 AM)
Author: BlessedOne
Poem Title: Chocolatecoffeshopla...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  Miko
07/09/09 (04:40 PM) 
Beautiful.

  Ryter
07/09/09 (10:44 AM) 
Cool write. Have you ever seen def poetry jam? If not you should probably check out some poets on youtube. Just put in def poetry jam. Cool write, keep it up*******

  Jody
06/17/09 (05:27 PM) 
cool... felt like venting... get it off your chest and leave it on paper...

  Chocolatezeus
02/17/09 (10:55 AM) 
this was astounding. the references and smooth but strong coffee like flow. Coupled with the music I am heading downstairs to fix me a cup of Jamaican Blue Mountain

  Tina T
02/15/09 (11:49 PM) 
wow on point. Love the lyrical content, great penmanship! You just spitting n flowing and it reads so natural like u wasnt tryna put things toether like it just flowed...i LOVE how you ended it...so my style lool. good work!

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