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"Seeking Answers"
  by RjC


I miss your smile each day.
Six years since you've gone.
Sometimes I wonder why
you had to leave us.
Was it truly your time?
Is fate even fact?
A tragic destiny;
twenty one years old ...
I'll never understand
until my time comes.
Then we'll be together.
You can fill me in.
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (11:25 AM)
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11/09/09 (01:27 PM) 
sad and very moving I understand completely I've lost someone that I truly loved and the pain will never leave, I hope you can find some comfort in knowing that, that person is in a better places pEACE.elevate

  leethal
11/08/09 (04:28 PM) 
time waits 4 no1 and death is unforgiving. all we can do is keep scripting life into these sheets! nice drop poet

  jamal
11/08/09 (03:31 PM) 
Damn this really touches the heart fam very emotional and powerful I've asked those same questions too many times good joint

  *Tha Scorpion*
11/07/09 (05:33 PM) 
Wonderfully expressed!

  Lady_Style
11/07/09 (02:51 PM) 
This is sad but still has a certain positive feel to it because of the endin.."then we'll be together, you can fill me in"...Yeah it's short but it expresses everythin you need it to. Nicely penned! Nuff love - Stylez

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