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"SELF- EXILED"
  by DC*


POSITIONED IN A BUBBLE
NO AIR
ALL ALONE
SELF-EXILED
MY HEART ONCE HAD A HOME
IN HER BODY IT ONCE REST
NOW IN A DEEP SLEEP IT SUFFERS
I ONCE LOVED HER
COMPILED TO SELF EXILE
BECAUSE NO ONE I TRUST
HEARTLESS WITHOUT A SOUL
LIKE THE LION IN THE WIZARD OF OZ
CONCLUDED WITHOUT AN ANSWER
THE WORLD I DESPISE
AND HERE I SIT ALL ALONE
SELF EXILED
NO PLACE TO CALL HOME
ROAMING WITHOUT A LEASH
A BRIDGE I SEE IF I JUMP OFF WILL I LAND TO MY FEET
A NAME I ONCE HAD
BUT YOU CAN'T TELL
I'M SUFFERING BECAUSE MY EYES HIDE THE PAIN
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Date Submitted: Oct 14, 2009 (04:54 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  A.Renee
11/21/09 (11:12 AM) 
im feelin this..cus im going tho the same thing..the way u channel ur feelin into this poem is amazin..good write

  LaurenLouise
11/21/09 (01:00 AM) 
Im feeling this alot, u remianed a man in this one and didnt show too much emotion but just enough to get ya point across.

  Lil Ms Cherry
11/20/09 (11:59 PM) 
I LOVE THIS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  Shanta`
11/20/09 (11:45 PM) 
Whoa ...this was truly deep bruh ...i was feeling this ...it was very sound ...so nice how the eyes can hide the pain ...bravo bro ...:)

  Whateveryoulik...
10/14/09 (05:36 PM) 
ive deff felt this way at one point in my life.. but jus gotta learn to let go n keep livin.. if u wish ur life were better.. and tht u cud love again.. then make it that way.. ur in control.. dont stay at a low for too long.. itll get too hard to see the light

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