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"Set Me Free(One Day)"
  by KiNg-Go0B3r







The battle is never over....just a calm before the next....and blood after...


Maybe one day
sooner or later some day
i'll find a way out of this pain
and stupid gun play

..shots fired
and im hopin' that it missed me
feelin' my body just to see if the bullet hit me....


..and i refuse to let one shot get me
and none shall break me
holdin' stronger than a brick piece

cement me in my own paint
and when they march in to take me
trust me it wont be the saints


War time
back stabbers tryin' to get more shine
so they take out their own
and leave the woes behind....


and thats fine
i'll pick the spot out fo' ya
and sip of cold water
with the chip on my shoulder


Cant walk across the street without pullin' alarms
and the dogs are released
in there visions is bones
and a skull head
the lord said dont touch my anointing

im waitin' fo' the holy ghost to place his touch on me

Set me free
i dont wish to be in this location
so i keep listenin' to Just Gotta' Make It


and i'll end my dream my self before you take it
Cause the monster inside me is darin' you to slay it....

im caged in
with no sign of escapin'


And if im superman
wheres my costume and cape then?


I'd like to go as far as a lake reach
then lie in my bed

cause i already made it...


and when im finally in a peaceful state
please dont startle me
i dont wish to wake

Let me leave please
i''d rather be in a better place


and hopefully
it'll be my soul that i'll take....

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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2009 (07:56 PM)
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  vandal
08/14/09 (06:48 AM) 
powerful message right here, your words are heart felt...thank you for sharing

  Jody
08/14/09 (02:17 AM) 
flowed and melancholy and forgive any other typos in there..

  Jody
08/14/09 (02:15 AM) 
wow... you nkow I got tears in my eyes... Goob, this is my fav of you thus far... amazing, the emotions. so felt... and perfect w/the song... I hardly ever read and listen to the song together, lol, but this time I didn't stop the music, it followed so well and tho the tone is a little melencholy it still has that glimmer like all said and done, everything that you went thru.. you'll be alright... one way or another... kudos my friend. great piece.

  daidai_dts4l
08/13/09 (08:57 PM) 
damn true fucking shit goob. thats real talk, everybody wanna get free man. the picture you painted with your words came out clear. gud shit man

  MzSpoon aka "T...
08/13/09 (08:53 PM) 
You have a cap, sweetie, but we just can't see it. I liked the tone of this write..determined to overcome adversity.

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