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"Shades and Hues of Emotions.."
  by SlimCutta


I had a bright colorful wish..
Bring and strong through the blues and yellows..
I had dreams of a light red hue..
Now a bloody stained red..
Congruent with the feelings and emotions that elude me..

Imagined her in a caramel brown..
Maybe even a dark brown with a shade of coco..
Lips as dark as the soil..
Eyes brown and soulful...
With a heart of bright gold..
Her love strangled me to a strong brush of brown..

Then one day a dark hue of blue..
Switched the feelings from a white to a midnite black..
Lost in a whirlwind of gray...stuck between..
This of green..that of yellow..
Consumed with a lust for that aforementioned ..red..
Dangerously low with a sickened blue..

The silver lining in my cloud had fallen out..
Now only a dark grey of solemn words..
While raindrops of shades of black stick out..
I wish her sun of bright yellow would return..
Brightening up my gloomy day with her words of vibrant love..

As the dark violet days consume my soul..
I took in the light orange rays that every now and then filled my room..
But moments later ..the dark shades of blue..violet ..and grew rolled through..
Truth emotions lived within..
While restless feelings colored themselves..

The days and nites of shady hues..brushed angeled shades..
And beaming colors..all took form..
Envious in their part of the emotional performances..
Surrendered their souls..
Lightening their hues and shades...
Brightening their subservient status..
Once again her brown eyes..darkened lips..
And bright smiled...all returned...
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Date Submitted: Jul 01, 2008 (09:15 PM)
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  Abz Bunny
07/04/08 (08:37 AM) 
this was a hott piece... the hues and the emotions that came from went together nicely... keep doin ur thang..

  Ezdozit
07/03/08 (01:15 PM) 
truly great piece I was with you on every Line true talent a real ten looking forward to more

  ☸۞...
07/02/08 (10:37 PM) 
ah...done wit class.power and poise...truly a remarkable piece my dude...can't say much more about this piece that u don't already kno...great write..

  Tina T
07/02/08 (01:07 PM) 
You know what, this concept was amazing, It really is amazing how colours can be used to describe our deepest emotiions and desires, i especially loved the second to last stanza when you saw the light at the rainbow, all sayings taken into consideration. Loved it!

  LaRaina
07/01/08 (11:10 PM) 
All kind of emotions going with this one boo... We gone have to talk about this one bro...lol It is wonderful as usual <3

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