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"Shadows of Discomfort"
  by AR-15


As I creep all through, what I visualize
Followers seem to appear, but are disguised
Figure less footprints are heard in the cool breeze of a hot wind
Very discomforting as my movements are equal to theirs
From beginning to end
No matter what, they surround
Observing me from the ground
No color, No frame
Just figures in the distance with no emotion, no heart or reason for shame
As I try to get away, followers continue to stay by my side
The followers were trying to take me down a route of unfamiliar territory
Away from the unknown
At that point, I was confused
For that, I never believed that shadows had minds of their own
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Date Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 (04:48 PM)
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  beyondangelic
08/22/08 (10:40 PM) 
Wow some real deep stuff. It had a nice message and good concept. I liked it. Ten stars definitely.

  BIG CHIEF
08/22/08 (06:55 PM) 
like the message in this piece brah...real deep...

  touchdapearl2
08/22/08 (05:05 PM) 
wow...this was a hellva ride here from beginning to end i was forming my thoughts from it til i hit the end and bam the concept hit me,fiya write

  TonySouthern
08/22/08 (04:55 PM) 
Hey AR you always do ya thing mi spitta. Been awhile since I've read some of ya work but like always this was on point. And to use the shadow. Who would have thought. Tight work

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