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"shattered images-(shards of lost hope)"
  by ARCH ANGEL
  - This Poem is a response to the poem SORRY IS THE REFLECTION YOU SEE IN THE MIRROR... by harley quinn/a fallen ang...


Mental portraits
Painting a perfect future in my mind
As these broken shards of glass
Cut through a love once defined
Just Left to wonder why
The shared heart of 2 subsides
As our weaved life untangles
What should have been interwined
Promises dissapear
Because I need you by myside
And you still choose to hide
When u said you\'d never make me cry

Picking up what\'s left of me
So I grab the dustpan
As I\'m swept forever gone
In thoughts of tryna be your man
Gave a bad deck of cards
Thought I had the perfect hand
You made me believe in myself
So in us how come we can\'t,
Trapped in the seconds
Of the 1 moment that you ran
When your in my past
Its kinda hard to advance
Watching the sorrow rain
Can I have this last dance
As time slows and I fade
The heart remains damp
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Date Submitted: Oct 18, 2009 (11:18 PM)
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  smooch
10/18/09 (11:33 PM) 
THIS WAS A DEEP AND BEAUTIFUL WRITE SORRY TO SEE U IN SO MUCH PAIN U KNOW U ALWAYS HAVE A FRIEND IN ME THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL

  harley quinn/a...
10/18/09 (11:26 PM) 
it\'s beautiful daish and i never wanted to make you cry i wanted to save you from drowning in the the pain i feel inside to set you free from my grief thats why i had to hide

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