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"She Cries"
  by Jody


Crack pop
Bright lights
Rain drops
Even Mother Nature cries...


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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (12:41 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/23/08 (07:19 AM)
Author: Syndel
Poem Title: Shes Awake

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  XPERIENCE
08/06/08 (03:10 AM) 
i agree..and the pic fits so well with this.. to be so short..its says so much..nice haiku

  The Mad Poet
08/02/08 (10:50 PM) 
I like the concept of this piece...the raindrops falling to the pavement...mother nature crying from the pain she sees everyday in this cold, harsh world we live in...very deep piece with such few words...signs of a great poetess...keep blessing us with your magnificent work!!

  N~Tyce
08/02/08 (09:52 AM) 
wow you work this piece beautifully. love the visual here. very descriptive. 10!

  mindigoblue
08/01/08 (02:02 PM) 
Yes it is true. There is a release for everything. For the Mother it always comes in the form of rain be it from dark eyes or dark skies. Wonderfully delivered as all you Haiku tend to be.

  `Scriptixz
07/30/08 (05:24 AM) 
there is a kind of exclusiveness for poets that are inspired by nature and i see that readily in you poet...surreal is the word i'm thinking of (thanks sincerious lol) and that is the feeling i get from your poetry :-)

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