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"She Did It"
  by BlessedOne


He drove up and dropped her off
Not even bothering to get out of the car
To help her make it into the house


…If looks could kill…


***

He told her to do it
As a matter of fact
He cried and pleaded for her to do it
Wearing her down emotionally with
His woe-is-me comments
Constantly reminding her that he already had
Five other children to support


I on the other hand,
Pleaded with her not to do it
I thought that HE
Was an arrogant bastard
How could he ask her to do it?
Knowing that this was something
That she had waited her whole life for


But,
In the end she sympathized with him,
Putting him before herself…
So,
As her best friend,
All I can now do is
Comfort her

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Date Submitted: Oct 24, 2009 (03:30 PM)
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  ButterflyDream
11/01/09 (03:17 PM) 
so many time we as woman place a man that we think we love before ourselves...even before our own children.without any judgement...this hammers home that fact.Its so sad that we have so little value of ourselves.....that God for the unmeasured worth that he has for us and the love ones placed in our life that see our value even when we dont.

  iva
10/27/09 (05:38 PM) 
go on and comfort her blessed.great words

  after vision
10/26/09 (01:40 AM) 
i pray that she didn\'t abort life -- for him and not for her -- without words i stand back feeling all of this

  RedLoveSong
10/25/09 (05:58 PM) 
Sounds like he likes the act of creating children, but doesn\'t want to take responsibility for them. Heavy piece you have here, so many deal with this decision..praise God for best friends.

  angeleyes1
10/25/09 (01:14 PM) 
wow blessed this is beautiful feel the emotions in this one here keep them flowing diva much love

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