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"She"
  by Dopeboyfresh
  - This Poem is a response to the poem She by Dopeboyfresh





See I was feeling like free styling with my bottom lip,
and Ma was gyrating ever so slightly as she bucked her hips.
Tongue kissing that set of lips overlapping her clit.
Grabbing my ears cause I'm devouring it.
Licking, sucking, nibbling, and dribbling. Feeling it...
Shit!
Momma calm down after shuddering a bit.
Yet I'm still at it.
I'm fantastic!
How long I lasted.
Coupled with lick lick tongue tricks
and slight flicks of the wrists.
Undressing,
taste testing,
I'll Eskimo kiss that shit!
Baby you ain't even caught everything on the list.
More than just slick words when a nigga feeling it
like this....
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Date Submitted: Oct 11, 2008 (10:43 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/11/08 (12:14 PM)
Author: Dopeboyfresh
Poem Title: She

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  *tQ*^Released
10/11/08 (06:52 PM) 
"See I was feeling like free styling with my bottom lip, and Ma was gyrating ever so slightly as she bucked her hips. "......damn i wasn't expecting 4 u to get right to the point<---tQ *FAINTS* right beside Rox-z...wakes up and says "I'll Eskimo kiss that shit! "...lol

  B. Rose
10/11/08 (05:53 PM) 
That was hot my nigga...

  --->ROXIE<---
10/11/08 (04:06 PM) 
Grabbing my ears cause I'm devouring it. Licking, sucking, nibbling, and dribbling. Feeling it... Shit! <----*FAINTS*...WOW

  Dimplez
10/11/08 (02:41 PM) 
ehhh nice word choice and flow...lmao i agree with the chick below...home gurl must have it going on lol, good write

  .Always.Catali...
10/11/08 (10:57 AM) 
I don't know this woman...but tell her she got my damn vote...if for no other reason than she makin you write like this...

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