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"SHE N0T RiGHT F0R Y0U"
  by (*B00*)


you caught me by suprise
wasnt expecting to see her face
its not that im N0T happy that you found the 0NE thats for you
its just crazy that shes the chick you gave your number one spot to
cant tell you the truth because me AND you were almost a WE
something there still lingers even tho the once [WE] is now a you and I
jealousy is always near when one of us finds our "REPLACEMENT" to replace eachother
so whose to say you`d believe the words i speak
even tho lies where never told
always a hint of deceit
im tryna protect you from getting involved
from what you find is not what you seek
what im getting at is
shes N0T the 0NE you seek
not right for you
dont doubt me
for what i say is true
some things are better left unsaid
faded pictures will shed
showing what lies beneath
breaking your heart is never the plan
but i care about you so much i cant let you fall
instead
im trying my best to keep you up
bluntly said
this chick dont give a fuck about you
shes just in it to play a game
so what is a girl to do?
contemplating
do i tell you the chick you love is not for you
or sit back and watch you fade away
because at the end of this game
your
GUARANTEED
to lose.
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Date Submitted: Sep 20, 2007 (09:03 PM)
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  jamal
05/29/09 (04:50 AM) 
this is a good joint ma... one of the joints where i can really seeing this happening.. very heart felt joint... im digging it

  freddy p
05/15/08 (09:47 PM) 
good write. i know relations to it.10 starz babes.

  Bubbleslil
01/06/08 (10:30 PM) 
wow chick i love this i feel u on this cause im kinda in da same boat an i dont call it jealousy i say u lokkin out for ya boy

  Versatile
10/01/07 (10:07 AM) 
Yea ima have to kind of agree wit andrew84 on dis one. Because are you sure that it isn't jealousy? Or maybe you just have a strong feeling deep down that she isn't the one for him? But anyway i like the concept that was addressed and very heart felt. Nice write.

  RA1N
09/30/07 (07:46 PM) 
this poem is real good and i can relate to this alot cause when my ex dachel i was going with everyone started telling me that she wasnt right for me and i didnt listen so i should of listend to them words just like whoever u telling this to should this also remind me of kaniqwa my cousin told me not to gowith her but this time i listend cause the signs was clearly seen

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