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"She told me no"
  by mmd2888


She told me no
As I led her upstairs
Turned the lights down low
Took the bun out her hair
She told me no
As I wrapped one arm around her waist
Pulled her close to me
Ran my hand across her face
She told me no
As I looked so deep in her eyes
Told her she was my world
And she's my beautiful sunrise
She told me no
As I whispered in her ear
My heart she couldnt hear
So i pulled her near
She told me no
As I kissed her on her lips
Ran my hand down her back
As I grabbed her by the hips
She told me
She said she wasn't ready yet
I told her lady not to worry
This will be a night you wont forget
She told me no
She's been hurt by her past
I said i'll take my time
Girl Im trying to be your last
Its so hard for me to not let my emotions show
So ready to plant these seeds and watch our love grow
Can you see yourself without me, R u ready to let go?
So softly and quietly she shook her head and
She told me no

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Date Submitted: Apr 24, 2009 (12:47 AM)
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  UnMasked
09/08/09 (05:28 PM) 
awww...i like the fact she gave in

  Poetic Lyricis...
08/05/09 (10:32 AM) 
Sounds like emotions was telling her no when she really wanted to oblige but anywho...this was a nice piece

  me-me
07/27/09 (06:50 PM) 
damn ma once again you blazed it loved it dont be surprise if you geta response haha love ya

  Ladyoflyrics
05/27/09 (12:40 AM) 
she told you no but all of her actions screamed yes...her willingless to listen and allow you to lead her said yes...her mouth said yes her words spoke no.....i love this story. no one said being a knight and shining armor was easy....good write writer

  Raxxie
04/24/09 (01:31 AM) 
then what happened??? an effective cliffhanger. i dont know if that what you were going for or not. i liked it though. its not a traditional love poem. theres a lot of conflict between the character. really enjoyed it

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