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"She Walked Away"
  by Sigmatic


I consider this my first real poem that I ever written even though it was really the 5th. So everybody be careful about commenting on it because like Erykah Badu said "I'm sensitive about my SHIT"


I wrote this poem for her.
For her and only her.
To let you know how I feel about her.
My life is incomplete without her,
but she walked away.

When I first met her she was cool.
We quickly became friends.
I made her laugh.
I made her smile,
but she walked away.

Someway somehow we ended up as lovers.
I tried to get close to her,
but she pushed me away.
I was confused why she acted this way,
but she walked away.

I asked her questions,
she never answered back.
I tried to give her time,
but she wouldn't give me her mind.
I tried to get her digits,
but she started her bitchin.
So this time,
I walked away
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Date Submitted: Apr 05, 2007 (02:48 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/15/08 (08:57 PM)
Author: HoneySuckle
Poem Title: " He Walked Away"

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  Stoykes
11/22/08 (07:34 PM) 
for this to be one of your early poems, you really did your thing. i'm loving the last few lines. i had to laugh at how she walked away about 3times but what truly ended it all was when you walked away. that to me was funny and classic.

  ColdHearted4Ly...
11/16/08 (11:01 PM) 
damn i feel u my boy u got 7 stars from me my boy

  Phirst Phoenix
11/15/08 (03:39 AM) 
I am not one to simply say, "Great write, 10 starz, I feel you homie-G-dawg-cuzin-fam..." Allow me to be brutally honest; as a human, we have levels of patience. When another human's actions exceed the limits of those levels, the true test has begun. I walked away from my fiance after a year of him trying my patience... but did you notice that I referred to him as my fiance? If it is destined, it shall be so, and no different. Whatever happens is the only thing that could have possibly happened,...
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  REALKISSES
07/21/08 (03:21 PM) 
wow u expressed your feelings so well on this write a def ten

  HoneySuckle
07/15/08 (08:15 PM) 
This is real deep! I really like this poem....

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