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"shi's SC Phantom Poet Challenge"
  by Jjonzzie


I begin to seduce, your manliness protrudes,

Is it just a tool you posess,

or something you know how to use?

Tonight love is meaningless.

I'm out for the hunt.

Pleading for mercy is pointless.

I need you to please my cunt

I need you to profess your loyalty

Lap at it uncontrolably, until it rains.

Show your appreciation orally.

There's no pleasure without pain.

Allow me to feel your venom

Flowing fleetingly through me

My heart suffers from an affliction

I'm in love with someone

Who's job has become an addiction

So I'll find another for love

While I'm lost in reflection.
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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2009 (07:02 PM)
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  RedLoveSong
07/16/09 (09:16 PM) 
So much control, confidence, and clarity...No questions needed..enjoyed this sensual piece of art.

  Untouched_Soul
07/16/09 (08:25 PM) 
very confident and sexy write

  Cornfed
07/16/09 (07:10 PM) 
Your pen dances on this ink! Loved it!

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