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"Shower Me With Your Breath"
  by Goddess of Light


Shower me with your breath...

Still me with your quiet mind

Looking for nothing, you see everything

Quench my thirsty soul with your kiss

Burning embers of a long forgotten fire ignite with your touch




Shower me with your breath

Hold me here in this moment

Your universe filling my eyes

Lost in the wilderness of you

Finding myself in the clear pools that gather in your hidden places




Shower me with your breath

Captivated by your silent words

This all consuming flame freeing you of your armor

Stand here beside me naked, defenseless, open

Drenched in our escaping air, shivering with anticipation, forever beholden to the universe

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Date Submitted: May 06, 2008 (06:57 AM)
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  JokerJay
11/18/08 (06:58 AM) 
u can feel the breath on the neck.

  loren
05/07/08 (03:15 PM) 
dats correct magic words. wish my grl shower same thing ...10stars

  D.K Lord of Da...
05/06/08 (12:22 PM) 
AS WORDS FLOW THE MAGIC OF THE PEN FLOWS LIKE MIDAS DUST.. HERE SO SIMPLE YET SO BEAUTIFULL.. NICE PIECE

  shyeboogie
05/06/08 (12:20 PM) 
incredible...when the words form i'll to leave you a better comment lol

  AfricanBlack
05/06/08 (10:43 AM) 
You have magic in your words... Love your style of writing...

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