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"Sighted Blindness"
  by Snugasaglove (The Rebirth)




As one ambles across the rolling landscape of life
Staggering in contemplation on which paths to choose
Sometimes stumbling over one's own feet,
Lost in a concentrated muse
Oft times forgetting to look up from such a dejected gaze
Upon the face,
One can FEEL the warming sunlight, but can't see the fantastic rays
Caught in a mental fog
As if each footstep presses deeper into a miring bog
Of doubt and confusion:
*Is my lot forever fated for exclusion?*

But, reeling in this intoxicated state
Only serves to further repress one's fate
When heavy sighs even eclipse a robin's sound
When it looks like stark and withered ground
And when hope seems bleak and shallow
The sowing field is not infertile......just only lying fallow.

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Date Submitted: Mar 26, 2009 (01:53 PM)
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  big josh
06/13/09 (11:16 PM) 
what a very beautiful piece, nicely done :)

  MAVRICK
05/01/09 (12:00 PM) 
This piece speaks leaps and bounds...knowing that we have a purpose and we got side-tracked somehow...but we must get back on point because we still have alot of seeds to sow into that part of our soul thats waiting for the right season...excellent scribe Snug...as usual

  ButterflyDream
04/26/09 (05:24 PM) 
This was beautiful,that last line says so much.Nicely done poet,I enjoyed:)

  11th Wonduh
04/05/09 (12:29 AM) 
simply beautiful. as the background was warm and this thought was very inviting

  (Floetic~One) ...
03/26/09 (11:17 PM) 
beautifullly written... and the background iz lovely too. 10 starz

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