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"Silent Weeping...(Another Tear Drop Falls)...."
  by JUST_DIFFERENT
  - This Poem is a response to the poem another tear drop falls by Reminesce


He left his home...life got so difficult
Outta abuse of the physical
He ran into the stormy drizzle......
Not knowing what to expect
And yet....
He prepared for the worst to come
Sleeping on the concrete....what had he become?
Silently.....he weeps......hoping that this pain can be erased
He looks up....only to see another problem meant to be faced....

Females showing explicit visuals
It got so un-simple......./ only an unheard cry
Another person..who couldn't just watch a passerby
But each one passed her by...
Each passing her thigh
Each intercourse got so hard..from a moan to a sigh
Till she had those silent tears in her eyes...

And the next soul...its love she loathes
Cant stand the man...but its the past love she holds
Each day a new hoe....Yet he claims he's so faithful
How did she end up with someone so ungrateful?...
She's held her tears for so long......she cant take it anymore
And from all the heartache another tear drop falls to the floor....

Hmm....and me?
I put everything in my poetry....
But yet....crumpled paper covers my room
Its hard to get out my thoughts...and I'll assume
That's its just a writers block...I'll soon resume......
With writing....
but sometimes it doesn't happen that way
From hours to days....
Weeks, maybe months....without letting my ink flow
Maybe I should just let it go...
Nah....for now...its something that I'll be keeping
But until then.....no one hears my silent weeping.....
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Date Submitted: Jun 28, 2007 (11:00 AM)
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  DiamondPrincez...
08/15/07 (11:19 PM) 
I Luv It...OMG dis was more den hoe...

  Blue Sky
07/02/07 (11:35 PM) 
YO man this poem is a very very very good poem and the fact that you put yourself into it only makes it better, the way you used the words to make it so that i can actually see what youre saying and use my imagination is a very good thing, and Then on top of that it connects with me i like it keep em coming. it was hot.

  lay-lay
06/30/07 (10:00 PM) 
Wow. I feel like that's all i can say. I most definitly give you ten stars for this poem and you already know this is going on my favorite poets list... this poem actually makes you visualize someone sleeping on concrete and through your words you can actually visualize how the person feels. And that's what makes even more realistic, then what it already is. The fact that you can feel his pain, and the pain that you feel towards him and the women in the poem as well.... Most definitly ten star...
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  mishel
06/30/07 (12:43 AM) 
dis was AMAZING! u had so much sincerity in dis write. and i know personally speakin i have been there many times mahself. but da power of da pen is a beautiful thang, and u expressed dat thru dis write. amazing . a 10 and a personal fave as well. keep ya head up and keep on doin ya thang.

  Ray
06/29/07 (12:26 AM) 
this piece is wonderful putting various peoples situations and emotions as well as dealings into it 10 stars

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