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"Silently"
  by *Jazique*


Silently….

I let my tears fall
Since I’ve been holding them in so long
Singing the same damn song

Wondering where did it all go wrong

Silent tears rolling down my face
Each releasing some part of me

All the times I’ve been hurt
…Treated like dirt

Pain building up inside
Wanting to lay down and die

Yet,
All I can do is cry
Getting farther and farther from the sky

Silently the tears roll down my face
No one seems to notice
No one seems to care

Where are all those people who promised they’d be there?
When I was in need?
Helping me to succeed?
Doing a good deed?

Nowhere in sight
Seems as if they’ve all taken flight
Out into the night
Not willing to put a little time aside for me; to help me with this fight
So, All I Can Do Is WRITE

Write with my paper and pen
Cuz it is my friend
Til’ the very end
Never letting me down
It’s always around

It catches my tears
Helps me with so many fears
It’s helped me through all these years

Silently the tears fall
Slowly down my face
Singing the same damn song

Wondering where did it all go wrong…

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Date Submitted: Jun 19, 2009 (03:36 AM)
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  คว...
09/10/09 (02:01 PM) 
its funny to me the harsh realities of life seem to scare away the people who claim to care about you.....writing is a very good form of emotional outlet....i like this piece because this is something that most of us on here will actually relate.....we have all had that moment when we couldnt express certain things and writing became our outlet...very beautiful.

  MAVRICK
07/09/09 (05:36 PM) 
This was a very sad emotional write, that brings to mind times when it seems everything is going wrong in my life, and everyone that I thought would be there in some way were not...but then I realized that they too were probably going through this same feeling, and like me, refuse to reach out, not wanting to seem needy...but it also helped me to see that I have to always look past clouds of dark emotion and see the light of what inner qualities I have that can help me self-heal without the need...
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  baby wiggles
06/26/09 (07:36 PM) 
WOWZERZ YOU DID YAH THING YO KEEP YAH HEAD UP AND YA PEN MOVIN IM OUT BABY BAYBAY

  *shell bear*
06/21/09 (02:31 AM) 
wow these are some powerful emotions i felt when reading this and i love your pic 10 starzzzzzzzzz

  ((Gitana))
06/20/09 (10:32 PM) 
We have all felt like this at one time or another. Sometimes it is only that paper we write on that dries our tears.

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