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"Sin and Redemption"
  by The Mad Poet


Pregnant with a rapist's child
Contemplating abortion
But, convinced by her new husband
to give birth saying he will stick by her side
Only to find out later she married a rapist...
**SMH**
Get this he's the same muthafucker who rape
her in the first place.
Damn how much punishment can one woman take??
It's like being raped twice by the same
sorry ass man!!
If that ain't
Sin & Redemption for
your ass.

You never can tell
what you're getting until
you pull back the layers of
character flaws.
Even then you barely break the
outer skin!!

"Sin and Redemption."

Redemption Song - Bob Marley & The Wailers

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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (12:19 PM)
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  DOMINICANPOET
10/14/08 (03:26 PM) 
damn this piece had me in awe...i couldnt believe this ten from me keep it coming...

  MzSpoon
10/06/08 (07:59 PM) 
So true...so true! You opened a can of worms with this one, MP. Great write!

  MAVRICK
10/06/08 (06:15 PM) 
This is exactly what soul-less shape shifters do, they stick close to you disguising themselves as friends or companions, to keep you under a constant bombardment of confusion and pain. Thanks for sharing this revelation of wicked manifestations in so-called human form.

  harley quinn/a...
10/06/08 (05:56 PM) 
damn....

  SoaringButterf...
10/06/08 (02:51 PM) 
Wow! I am speechless. I agree whole-heartedly. I have a friend who falls in love too quickly and trusts her children to them way before she should. Love should be taken seriously and not just given away. Get to know what that person is about. 10 snaps, MP

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