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"SIOP!!!!!!!!!!"
  by Searchin lyfe


Stop

stop walking for a minute
i want you to turn around
and look how far you've come.

Stop

stand still for a minute
i want you to look back
and see how much you've traveled

i know that you are tired
and want some place to rest
but for a minute, please,

Stop

look over mountains, through forests
across bridges, through tunnels...

Remember?

remember when you loved so hard
it hurt?
and you cried and cried until
the tears could no longer
fall
and you learned to endure
the pain?

Stop

because what i want you to remember
has nothing to do with when you were
giving up
but everything to do with the
moment you
began.

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Date Submitted: Jan 20, 2009 (04:40 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  BIG CHIEF
01/21/09 (02:50 PM) 
yo cuzzo this a was inspiring and uplifting write ....it was deep and powerful too..i have to fav this homie..you did yah thang on dis one

  MzSpoon aka "T...
01/20/09 (06:58 PM) 
Well, I have to agree with Sum-Thyng and say that your ending was powerful..but sometimes you just feel like giving up.

  Syndel
01/20/09 (06:31 PM) 
I agree with Sum that is a a hell of a great ending just makes you want to stop

  Sum-Thyng Like...
01/20/09 (04:42 PM) 
very powerful ending

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