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"Sittin in the Grass"
  by DaDutchezz


Sittin in the grass
outside
in front of the cafeteria
at MHS
i missed my childhood
it reminded of them summer days
when i was little
sittin on my swingset
watchin Dad mow the grass
i remember sayin "ouch"
when things from the lawn mower
would ricochet and hit me
in my legs
leaving many war wounds
it reminded me of the
countless nights
i spent in my sisters
pink
daybed waitin for the
madness
to end
it reminded me of
the thoughts
i had
the want to have peace;
sitting in the grass
outside
in front of the cafeteria
at MHS
it reminded me of
those fall days
when my sister
and i
would rack leaves and
hide
in the pile
it reminded me of
my childhood
the good times
when
there were no worries
it reminded me of
Daddy
when i was his
world
when i was the
only thing he
needed to get by
when we got along
when we went
fishin
our trips to the
riverfront
in STL
the good times
the
GREAT
times
i miss them
my childhood
like
when i was
sittin in the grass
outside
in front of the cafeteria
at MHS
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Date Submitted: Jun 10, 2007 (11:53 PM)
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  Dey call me DE...
08/24/07 (05:36 PM) 
beautiful...i have moments just like this...when u get lost in past events and forget where u are...then u stap back like...wow...u captured that feeling in this poem...kudos

  *BMORES FINEST...
08/23/07 (11:01 PM) 
im really feelin dis one. u got deep on dis 1 4real n ya flow wuz serious to, keep doin ya thing

  Browngrl86
08/22/07 (11:08 AM) 
I like this a lot....your line breaks are on point! this could easily be spoken word!! Good job! 10 starz....

  crazydaisy92
08/07/07 (09:55 PM) 
yeah...i sometimes think back to those childhood days and miss em...everything was so simple then...amazing write i loved the concept of this one!

  LotusBlossom
08/07/07 (09:52 PM) 
This was really nice. Such an innocence to it. A feel good write, in a weird sort of way.

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