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"SMH #2(longest write i'll ever do)"
  by KiNg-Go0B3r
  - This Poem is a response to the poem A Goob To The Goons... by B.R


Ground Zero (Instrumental) - Dipset

AYO......NEVER THOUGHT I'D HAVE TO DO ANOTHER SMH MAYN.......

ok so

B.R.
you are
acting so changed
deranged in the head
insane on the brain
but, you dissing me
but its like we used to be blood
as if leaving me alone just wasn't enough
dissing me, cause asyplediamond dissed D.P.
gues that falls back on me
naw bruh im sorry
i don't have goons, i have homies
so at the top, i won't be so lonely
where you at????
like T-MOBILE
sitting there acting salty
sorry for what im saying
naw not really, it has to be said
you saying that we used to break bread
USED to is what you said
you so right about that
cause you went hypocritical
and explaining that to you
would be like standing on ground zero
your emotions, they get the best of you
and i couldn't say
that they don't get the best of me too
you and D.P. pushing me away
and no matter what i say
yall probably just going to respond
and twist my words anyway
put them against me like im crazy
well there's no thumb in my mouth
im not a baby
B.R.....whats a goob to a dragon.....???
nigga while you saying that...im honestly lauhing
coughing on my blood, cause that sound kind of savage
but its all fucked up like old cabage
really need to think about what you doing.....
instead of pushing me like a carrage

Girls, Girls, Girls (Produced By Just Blaze) - Jay-Z


JEN...D.P.
sorry for the goverment
but im talking to you
not your GS synonym
listen, don't blow me off please listen
we been cool like day one
back in the day son
hmmm.....now you drieing up on me like a rason
season and reasons, and my heart is bleeding
cause i say things out of anger, and you do too
but im not a dog, mans best friend, naw, i don't do pleasing
please me, yes, me best, one of, yes
to me i am, well why i can't you just let me believe that
like you man, you pushing me away
im not jump shot, so i will never fade away
i love you, i love daish too
no homo, yall fam, but yall acting
like i don't no me no more
but i do, me, brand new
to you maybe, but lately
every one else liking the new gooby baby
tried to make things work
but you got me pissed
and after that,
you might as well had did a diss but it missed
naw, not even it struck me in my heart
but im too strong to fall apart
and this is not a diss, NO BITCHASSNESS, it wasn't a diss
is was simply a statment, for the group, NO BITCHASSNESS
im still willing to let all this be forgiving
cause now matter how yall hit me
im still preaching no dissing

Mr Carter [Quality Edit] [Wit Hook] - Lil Wayne


....SMH......HOW DID WE GET HERE.......REALLY...IS THIS HAPPENING.......

(AFTER HOOK)

smh...look at all the good times we missing
yall steady dissing
while im steady missing
my family, aiming me
damn me, damn this
why this, B.R., this song, do you remember this
the fun we used to have with this
now i got to be the bigger man with this
called me a clit
and D.P. saying, IIGHT REMEMBER THIS
and putting out our business, on GS
maybe it didnt have my name, but the last thing did
and they were basically all the same
didn't show love to your writes JEN
well how i was i supposeto know
you was still showing love then
if you were never leaving any commnets
why show love to never get it again
if i like the work, why get at it
i'll never recieve a ten
writing for my self, and even in the end
i still got love for yall, but could we ever begin again
don't even seem like it
i didn't send asympolediamond in
to diss, naw she did that because she my FRIEND

*ALL FOUR WE GO, TIL THE END OF THE ROAD, STILL I CAN'T LET GO*
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/23/08 (03:51 AM)
Author: B.R
Poem Title: Failed Attempt...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (20)
  L.edwards
07/23/08 (08:45 PM) 
i cant do nothing but respect the words you wrote you were a man and stepped up

  poetri1st
07/23/08 (08:03 PM) 
Idk wats going on btwn you guys but it seemed like something went terribly wrong and theyre coming after you...dont want to get in the mix of this but all I gotta say is thing s will get better soon...nice way to come back without disrespecting anyone...take it easy brotha, one love

  One
07/23/08 (06:11 PM) 
I feel you...like the way u laid your thoughts out here....big of you the way you handled it...much love

  Guey2
07/23/08 (04:35 PM) 
this is a very mature statement young brother

  NINO-G
07/23/08 (03:55 PM) 
Well, you already know how I feel about this one...excellent way of showing your character over all the negativity

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