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"Snowy Morning"
  by Brokenvegtable
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Intimately Awaiting Winter by ควา$...


Of frost covered windows
The white ground covered lightly
I notice my lovers arms around me
As I feel her body next to me

I get excited as I know I spent the night
Knowing how much fun we had
Playing in the snow, doing all the kid things
And laughing to me, was most fun

Now I lay awake as she still sleeps
I dare not wake her , but I must see her
As I slowly turn to face her, her eyes still closed
As I lay there just staring at her

I put my arm around her and slowly pull her closer
Knowing I might wake her
I think Ill take that chance
Still her body I want to feel

The covers are so soft and thick
Its hard to keep them balanced on us
As they seem to always be more on her side
And I smile and think, blanket hog

But something about us spending the night
Out where technology cant touch us
Where cell phones don’t work
And there is still no such thing as the internet

No TV to keep us entertained
Just our imaginations and our hands
And I think Im gona put mine to good use
As I search under the cover for the rest of her body

I map out her landlines like Im reading brail
Touching spots I know to be unlike anyone else
The things I know about, and no one else
Places she likes to be touched, to feel her skin

Im so happy Im with her, she makes me feel like a king
And its when she is asleep I find my most prized moments
To look at her and stare without a care
As I peek under the covers, and indulge in her body

I look at her breasts and gently rub my fingers over her nipples
Feeling her skin as the texture changes
She knows not Im doing this, its all a dream to her
As my finger dance and play touching lightly on her breasts

I slowly move them down your side to her stomach
As I rub on it too, playing with you belly button
Thinking about how sexy she will be pregnant
Even though she already has a scar, I still find it incredibly sexy

As my hand gets more excited I become more daring
And move to her hips, and lightly feel the skin she always covers
Such smooth and inviting skin I am touching
Makes me so happy I can to know that I am allowed anytime I want

I just want to make her so happy
To show that I love her
To have her melt because of me
To hear her say oh my god

And with that I move my hand onto her leg and more over
And in-between as I now want her to wake up
To the feeling of me touching her where she like me to touch her most
Cause I know it makes her feel good, my hands on her

I hear a slight moan and then feel her wrestle around
As she lays on her back and then opens her legs, now I know she awake
And I come all under the blankets now
Preparing to rest my face between her legs

I look down in the partly dark place Im in
As I rub her softly and gently with my hand and finger
Knowing right where to touch
Know where it makes her smile and bit her lip

I move my face down and begin my journey to satisfy her
Between her legs I am taking all that she will give me
As I start to feel her grinding slowly
Moaning lightly for now to let me know Im doing a good job

Its not long before shes pressing my hand into her with her hands
And grinding hard against me she, I know what she likes
And how to get her going, as my face takes no breaks
I feel her tighten up around my head and then

AAAHHHHHHHHHH MMMMMMMMM AAAAAAAAAA

That’s one down several more to go, as I clean up after her little mess she made
Not caring about how dirty she gets me, its my pleasure to be dirty for her
As she marks me with her scent, covers me with her juice
Makes me want to do it even harder and longer for her

Its not long before I introduce my finger to her
While my face still keeps its action going
Now with both things working her out
I can get another pleasurable moan in about
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MMMMMM AAAHHHHHH YYYYEEEEEAAAAAA

And she grinds her hips into me harder as I feel her legs begin to shake
Knowing this is killing her to feel like this
When we are alone and together, away from the world
This is the prefect place to enjoy her like this

And enjoy her I will, with my face and finger working on her
I us my free hand to rub her slowly, in the place she like to rub herself
Now that I have three things going all at once I know Im in for a big one
And I might have to swallow a few times on it

My hand rubs her faster and faster, my finger slides in her harder and harder
And my face does what its does best, keeping her clean
And then she stats to scream nasty words that I wont say here
Telling me to do things to her, telling me to take whats shes gona give me

And I put all three things into full effect
Going as fast as I can, as hard as I can and as clean as I can
Knowing shes about to let it all go into my mouth
As I wait for the right moment

She tenses up and I know its coming
Its about to be like no other
She shoves my face into her and grind her hips to me very hard and slow
And then it happens

She lets it all go
And im there to take it all
Swallowing every drop
Or as much as I can

Knowing Ill have a mess to clean up
But Im happy to do it
Even after she is done
Because I don’t need anything in return for this

Just a smile on her face for the rest of the day
Until we come back tonight
And then I finish what I have started
As it will be straight to desert, cause I just had the main course

But for that Im gona make her wait all day …..









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Date Submitted: Oct 23, 2009 (07:58 AM)
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  Syndel
10/28/09 (06:25 PM) 
this was light and very cozy def makes me miss ct love the longing and the feel of being missed and being right there this was gentle I like this side

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