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"So beautiful"
  by LAB **Ms. Cool Whip**


So Beautiful - Musiq Soulchild


I write
Mostly
About inebriated conversations
heightened instances
beginning pretend passions
Making the signatures artificially scribbled
In the wiggle of the beverages straw
The lucks draw
In my draws
Depending on the percentage of alcohol
Blended in slanted eyes
Got me…
Shaken… not stirred…
Contrary to popular belief
Or what you might think you heard
Still Im preserved
A diamond in the rough
Im not difficult
Just …
Overly concerned
In my time ive learned
Love is my weakness
Too much ambition
Makes pussy seem effortless
….The challenge is lost in the translation…..
I’m not begging for love
I’m praying for patience
And
Looking for placement
So labels of “hos”
Would make you
A racist
Hung on a noose
Male population labeled me
Lose

Not a lover abused…

And I’m still so beautiful….

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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2009 (12:34 AM)
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  big josh
08/07/09 (12:55 PM) 
wow, this was a beautiful piece, i really enjoyed reading this right here

  *Miss Toya*
08/05/09 (11:32 PM) 
i love the concept...and this is one of my favorite songs by musiq...beautiful you are ms. lady...as is this piece....the lines that stood out to me though were"In my time ive learned Love is my weakness" how true is that for so many people...i can relate to that like you have no idea....wonderful ink...

  "Word$mith"
07/25/09 (09:20 PM) 
Yo LAB this was ILL in everyy sense of the word...Depending on the percentage of alcohol Blended in slanted eyes Got me… Shaken… not stirred… Contrary to popular belief Or what you might think you heard Still Im preserved a diamond in the rough...I love that..Ma ma U shine.

  Kunspikuous
07/23/09 (09:38 PM) 
you have truly spoken for most females in this one. love just so happen to be my weakness as well. you similes are on point. the word play is awesome. how you explained wat you usually write about and took that and submitted it into a poem itself was brilliant. ima have to add this as a fave and give you 10pts for this one. can't wait to see more. great write. and still im so beautiful? amazing piece....i truly applaud you!!!

  *~Raw Sensuali...
07/23/09 (09:26 PM) 
You are indeed beautiful...and I love you girl... your talent astounds me each and every time... when you drop... you drop hard...

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