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"So dreams the dreamer ( LD Challenge )"
  by angeleyes1


I have so much pain,
And very deep pride,
I had a bad dream,
And it made me cry,

I wake up fast,
Cause I don’t want to know,
This pain in the night,
For dreams forever grow,

My cry unheard,
I was in need of prayer,
I whispered to God,
I need your loving care,

This dream is strong,
And feels so true,
I scream to God,
What should I do?

Take away all this misery,
It hurts too deep to breathe,
I beg and plea.
Please God set me free,

So dream the dreamer,
Buried deep pain inside,
I live to dream,
And I dream to hide.

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Date Submitted: Feb 05, 2009 (09:43 AM)
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  CinCity
02/19/09 (07:13 PM) 
wow Angel this was powerfula nd full of truth I relate to this...on such a personal level...keep writing and growing...10

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
02/09/09 (10:25 PM) 
sometimes people can only escape lifes hard reality by dreaming of better times to come.... excellent poem...."So dream the dreamer, Buried deep pain inside, I live to dream, And I dream to hide. "

  *~Raw Sensuali...
02/09/09 (01:36 PM) 
"So dreams the dreamer...buried deep pain inside...I live to dream..and I dream to hide".... lady...I issued this title challenge...and you went so far above and beyond what I thought I would read from it....beautiful lamentations of the soul...

  MAVRICK
02/05/09 (11:14 PM) 
AE your words expressed the uneasiness that comes with having painful dreams...keep expressing...let it out and let your pen continue to flow...

  Bud Edward
02/05/09 (11:35 AM) 
Wow... I can really relate to this piece somehow... I think the last part is what speaks to me the most. "I live to dream, And I dream to hide". I've felt exactly like that, but never put it into words. From reading this it also makes me wonder what the nightmare was. I hope your dreams are not so troubled lately.

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